Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I were a child. Umm, I need to write my bicycle to go to school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, shared bikes are very popular in China because they are affordable and widely available. For example, most of them only charge two RMB for the first fifteen minutes, which makes them very convenient and

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,但有明显语法和词汇错误:应将“when I were”改为“when I was”,将“write my bicycle”改为“ride my bicycle”。另外,回答只有一个不完整的原因,建议补充自行车的外观、用途或骑车时的感受,并使用“because”或“so”等连接词,使内容更完整自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school because it was convenient and saved my parents the trouble of driving me. It was a small blue bike, and I really enjoyed riding it with my friends after class.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,也提供了原因和具体例子,词汇使用较自然。但答案在“and”处中断,影响完整性和流畅性;“most of them only charge two RMB”表达不够准确,建议改为“many bike-sharing services charge around two yuan for the first fifteen minutes”。最后应补充完整结果,例如说明它们适合短途出行。

Ví dụ: Yes, shared bikes are very popular in China because they are affordable and widely available. For example, many bike-sharing services charge around two yuan for the first fifteen minutes, which makes them convenient for short trips. They are especially common near subway stations and shopping areas.

Ngữ pháp

ID 5:Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× Yes, I had a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

“When I was a child”描述过去的状态,因此使用过去时。主语“I”搭配be动词的过去式“was”,不能使用“were”。建议记住:I was;you/we/they were。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Available— Obtainable
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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