Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接，也提供了年龄、送礼人和学习骑车的细节，但有几处明显的词汇和语法错误。 “He told me how to write”应改为“He taught me how to ride”；“write out my own”应改为“ride on my own”；“it took me 3 weeks to...”可以说“it took me three weeks to learn to ride without training wheels”；“ride around my child”应改为“ride around during my childhood”。另外，结尾重复使用“ride around”，可以合并并使用“so”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was eight, my grandfather bought me a bicycle as a birthday present. He taught me how to ride, and it took me about three weeks to learn to ride without training wheels. I was thrilled because I could finally ride around my neighborhood with my friends.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，并尝试进行过去和现在的比较，但句子连接不清晰，且存在重复和时态问题。“people like to go to go”应改为“people used to cycle”；“and but”不能同时使用；“now more people will choose subway or bike”逻辑不明确，因为前文已经提到骑自行车，且“subway”前通常需要加“the”。可以明确说明：自行车仍然受欢迎，但在大城市，越来越多人选择地铁，原因是交通拥堵或通勤距离较长。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially for short trips and exercise. However, a few years ago, more people used to cycle to work, whereas nowadays many commuters prefer taking the subway. This is mainly because public transportation is faster and more convenient in crowded cities.

× And I was so happy that I can ride around my child, ride around with my friend.

✓ And I was so happy that I could ride around during my childhood and ride around with my friends.

主句使用了过去时“was”，所以从句中的能力也应使用过去式情态动词“could”，而不能使用现在时“can”。建议根据主句时态选择情态动词：过去用“could”，现在用“can”。

× And I was so happy that I can ride around my child, ride around with my friend.

✓ And I was so happy that I could ride around during my childhood and ride around with my friends.

这里表示和不止一个朋友一起骑车，因此“friend”应使用复数形式“friends”。当名词表示多个对象时，通常要加复数词尾“-s”或“-es”。

× A few years ago people like to go to go to work by bike and but now more people will choose subway or bike.

✓ A few years ago, people liked to go to work by bike, but now more people choose the subway or a bike.

“A few years ago”表示过去的时间，所以动词“like”应改为过去式“liked”。看到表示过去的时间短语，如“a few years ago”或“last year”，要使用一般过去时。

× A few years ago people like to go to go to work by bike and but now more people will choose subway or bike.

✓ A few years ago, people liked to go to work by bike, but now more people choose the subway or a bike.

“and”和“but”不能在这里同时使用，因为“but”已经表达了前后转折关系。应删除“and”，只保留“but”。同时，句中“go to go”是重复表达，正确形式是“go to work”。

× A few years ago people like to go to go to work by bike and but now more people will choose subway or bike.

✓ A few years ago, people liked to go to work by bike, but now more people choose the subway or a bike.

“now”表示现在的情况，不是将来，因此“will choose”不合适，应改为一般现在时“choose”。描述当前的习惯、事实或趋势时，通常使用一般现在时。

× A few years ago people like to go to go to work by bike and but now more people will choose subway or bike.

✓ A few years ago, people liked to go to work by bike, but now more people choose the subway or a bike.

“subway”在这里表示具体的公共交通系统，前面通常使用定冠词“the”，即“the subway”。“bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词，因此应说“a bike”。

× A few years ago people like to go to go to work by bike and but now more people will choose subway or bike.

✓ A few years ago, people liked to go to work by bike, but now more people choose the subway or a bike.

原句中“go to go”重复，且“and but”连词搭配错误，导致句子结构混乱。应改为“go to work”，并用“but”连接过去和现在的对比。