Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't. My family is uh, not of not rich when I was a child. Because, uh, I have a Sir.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, many people can write back to school or to work in my country. Either pop or not.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and give one clear reason. The phrase “not of not rich” is grammatically incorrect; say “my family wasn’t very wealthy.” The final phrase is unclear and should be removed or replaced with a specific detail. Use a linking word such as “because” correctly, and make sure your answer is natural and complete.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t. My family wasn’t very wealthy when I was a child, so we couldn’t afford to buy a bike. I usually walked to school instead.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Use “ride a bike,” not “write back,” and avoid the unclear phrase “Either pop or not.” You could explain who rides bikes and why, using a linking word such as “especially” or “because.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to school or work, especially in smaller cities. They are convenient, inexpensive, and environmentally friendly.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× My family is uh, not of not rich when I was a child.

✓ My family was not rich when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a finished period in the past, so the past-tense verb was is required instead of is. Remove the unnecessary words of not. For better fluency, avoid fillers and say: My family was not rich when I was a child.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Either pop or not.

✓ They are either popular or not.

Pop is not the correct adjective in this context. Use popular to describe whether bikes are liked or widely used. The adjective must follow the linking verb are. You can also say: Bikes are quite popular in my country.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Either pop or not.

✓ They are either popular or not.

The original expression does not contain a subject or a verb, so it is an incomplete sentence. Add the subject they and the linking verb are to form a complete sentence. In natural speech, a clearer option is: Bikes are very popular in my country.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Rich— Wealthy; Abounding in; Plentiful; Fertile; Strong
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