Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính và thông tin cụ thể về thời điểm cũng như người dạy bạn đi xe đạp. Tuy nhiên, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên: “Definitely I” nên đổi thành “Yes, I did”, “my first bike was” nên là “I got my first bike”, “need to learn to how to ride” nên là “needed to learn how to ride”, và “the first person that teach me” nên là “the first person who taught me”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm chi tiết bằng từ nối như “because” hoặc “and”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was in secondary school because I needed to learn how to ride to school. My grandfather was the first person who taught me, so I have very fond memories of that bike.

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm và đưa ra hai lý do rõ ràng: xe đạp rẻ và tốt cho sức khỏe. Tuy nhiên, câu trả lời bị lặp từ và có nhiều từ đệm như “So”, “personally speaking” và “uh”; “ride a bike to transport to work” nên đổi thành “ride their bikes to work”, còn “to buy food” nên diễn đạt là “to buy groceries”. Hãy dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn: câu trả lời trực tiếp, tiếp theo là ví dụ về người dân ở quê bạn, rồi nêu lý do bằng “because” hoặc “Moreover”.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in my hometown, where many people cycle to work or ride to nearby shops to buy groceries. This is mainly because cycling is affordable, environmentally friendly, and good for their health.

× Definitely I my first bike was when I was in secondary school where I need to learn to how to ride a bike to for school and the first person that teach me how to ride is my grandfather.

✓ Definitely, I got my first bike when I was in secondary school, when I needed to learn how to ride a bike to go to school, and the first person who taught me how to ride was my grandfather.

The original sentence has an incomplete and disorganized structure, especially in the phrase 'I my first bike was'. The sentence also incorrectly combines several clauses without clearly connecting the subject and verb. Use 'I got my first bike' to form a complete clause and organize the information into a logical sequence.

× Definitely I my first bike was when I was in secondary school where I need to learn to how to ride a bike to for school and the first person that teach me how to ride is my grandfather.

✓ Definitely, I got my first bike when I was in secondary school, when I needed to learn how to ride a bike to go to school, and the first person who taught me how to ride was my grandfather.

The question asks about a past experience, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Need' should be 'needed' because this learning happened in the past.

× Definitely I my first bike was when I was in secondary school where I need to learn to how to ride a bike to for school and the first person that teach me how to ride is my grandfather.

✓ Definitely, I got my first bike when I was in secondary school, when I needed to learn how to ride a bike to go to school, and the first person who taught me how to ride was my grandfather.

The verb 'teach' should be changed to its irregular past-tense form, 'taught', because the grandfather taught the student in the past.

× Definitely I my first bike was when I was in secondary school where I need to learn to how to ride a bike to for school and the first person that teach me how to ride is my grandfather.

✓ Definitely, I got my first bike when I was in secondary school, when I needed to learn how to ride a bike to go to school, and the first person who taught me how to ride was my grandfather.

The verb 'is' should be 'was' because the speaker is describing a past event. The first person who taught the speaker was the grandfather at that time.

× Definitely I my first bike was when I was in secondary school where I need to learn to how to ride a bike to for school and the first person that teach me how to ride is my grandfather.

✓ Definitely, I got my first bike when I was in secondary school, when I needed to learn how to ride a bike to go to school, and the first person who taught me how to ride was my grandfather.

The phrase 'to for school' uses prepositions incorrectly. The correct expression is 'to go to school': the first 'to' introduces the purpose or movement, and the second 'to' introduces the destination.

× So definitely yes, personally speaking, I can see a lot of people in my hometown, the city, uh, ride a bike to transport to work or to buy, buy food and because it's very cheap and also very healthy to ride.

✓ Definitely, yes. Personally speaking, I can see a lot of people in my hometown riding bikes to get to work or buy food because cycling is very cheap and healthy.

The expression 'transport to work' is not used correctly in this context. Use 'get to work' to describe traveling to work. The preposition 'to' correctly follows 'get' when introducing the destination.

× So definitely yes, personally speaking, I can see a lot of people in my hometown, the city, uh, ride a bike to transport to work or to buy, buy food and because it's very cheap and also very healthy to ride.

✓ Definitely, yes. Personally speaking, I can see a lot of people in my hometown riding bikes to get to work or buy food because cycling is very cheap and healthy.

The conjunction 'and' before 'because' incorrectly joins two unrelated parts of the sentence. Remove 'and' and use 'because' directly to introduce the reason why people ride bikes.

× So definitely yes, personally speaking, I can see a lot of people in my hometown, the city, uh, ride a bike to transport to work or to buy, buy food and because it's very cheap and also very healthy to ride.

✓ Definitely, yes. Personally speaking, I can see a lot of people in my hometown riding bikes to get to work or buy food because cycling is very cheap and healthy.

The original sentence contains unnecessary interruptions and combines several ideas in an unclear way. A clearer structure is subject plus verb plus purpose, followed by a reason: 'people ... ride bikes to ... because ...'. This makes the answer easier to understand.