Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have a bike when I was child because we are so poor and we don't have money to buy for that. Bye. Thank you.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are popular in our country because some of the children using it and they use it as a

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly using the past tense: “No, I didn’t.” Then give one clear reason and, if possible, add a specific detail. Correct the tense errors (“don’t have” → “didn’t have,” “we are” → “we were”), use the natural phrase “buy one” instead of “buy for that,” and avoid ending with “Bye. Thank you,” as this is unnecessary in the IELTS Speaking test.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. We were quite poor, so I usually walked to school or played with my friends near my home.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Give a complete answer with a clear topic sentence, and finish your explanation. Correct the grammar by changing “some of the children using it” to “many children use them.” Add specific reasons, such as cycling to school, exercise, or avoiding traffic. Use the plural pronoun “them” to refer to “bikes,” and connect your ideas with a linking word such as “also” or “because.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. Many of them use bikes to travel to school or visit their friends. Bikes are also convenient and inexpensive, and they help people avoid traffic and stay healthy.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past experience, so the past tense 'didn't have' is required instead of the present-tense form 'don't have.'

Article errors

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

The singular countable noun 'child' needs the indefinite article 'a' in this expression.

Past tense issue

× because we are so poor

✓ because we were very poor

The student is describing the family's situation during childhood, so the past-tense form 'were' is needed instead of 'are.'

Past tense issue

× we don't have money to buy for that

✓ we didn't have money to buy one

The situation happened in the past, so 'didn't have' is required. The phrase 'buy for that' is also corrected to 'buy one' because 'one' refers to a bike.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× buy for that

✓ buy one

The preposition 'for' is not used in this expression. Use the pronoun 'one' to refer back to 'a bike': 'buy one.'

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country because some of the children using it and they use it as a

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country because some children use them.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains the fragment 'children using it.' A complete clause needs the finite verb 'use.' The unfinished phrase 'as a' should be removed unless it is followed by a complete description.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× some of the children using it

✓ some children use them

'Bikes' is plural, so the object pronoun should be 'them,' not the singular pronoun 'it.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Poor— Poverty-stricken; Substandard; Meager; Unproductive; Deficient in
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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