Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 语法和搭配错误较多，影响表达的准确性。应使用过去时： “had,” “was given”，并将 “learn to write a bike” 改为 “learn to ride a bike”。建议先直接回答问题，再补充自行车的来源和学习经历；同时使用 “and” 或 “so” 连接信息，避免逗号连接多个完整句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was given to me by my cousins, so it was very special to me. I learned to ride it with my grandmother’s help.

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确，但存在重复和语法问题。将 “I think no bikes are not popular” 改为 “I don’t think bikes are very popular”，将 “traffic is very jammed” 改为更自然的 “the roads are very congested”，并把 “not safety” 改为 “not safe”。可以补充一个具体结果，例如骑车人面临的风险或人们更倾向使用汽车和公共交通。

Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. The roads are often heavily congested, and cycling can be unsafe because of the busy traffic. As a result, many people prefer to use cars or public transportation.

× I have a bike when I was a child, the bike is given from my cousins and I started to learn to write a bike with my grandma.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child. The bike was given to me by my cousins, and I started to learn to ride a bike with my grandma.

“when I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此“have”应改为过去式“had”。“is given”也应改为过去时“was given”，因为这件事发生在童年时期。这里使用被动语态时，应说“was given to me by my cousins”，其中“by”表示动作的执行者，“to me”表示接受者。

× I have a bike when I was a child, the bike is given from my cousins and I started to learn to write a bike with my grandma.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child. The bike was given to me by my cousins, and I started to learn to ride a bike with my grandma.

在被动语态中，表示“由谁赠送”要使用介词“by”，所以“from my cousins”应改为“by my cousins”。“given to me”表示“送给我”，搭配更加准确。

× I have a bike when I was a child, the bike is given from my cousins and I started to learn to write a bike with my grandma.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child. The bike was given to me by my cousins, and I started to learn to ride a bike with my grandma.

原句用逗号连接了多个完整句子，形成逗号拼接错误。可以把句子拆开，或者使用连词连接。这里将前半部分和后半部分拆成两个句子，使结构更清晰。

× I think no bikes are not popular in my country because in my country the traffic is very jammed and it is not safety to ride a bike.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the traffic is very congested, and it is not safe to ride a bike.

“safety”是名词，不能放在“it is not ___”结构中作表语。此处需要使用形容词“safe”，表示“安全的”。“traffic is very jammed”表达不自然，使用形容词“congested”表示“交通拥堵的”更准确。

× I think no bikes are not popular in my country because in my country the traffic is very jammed and it is not safety to ride a bike.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the traffic is very congested, and it is not safe to ride a bike.

“I think no bikes are not popular”中同时使用了“no”和“not”，造成双重否定，表达不清楚。可以改为“I don't think bikes are popular”，意思是“我认为自行车不受欢迎”。回答否定观点时，使用“I don't think...”比“I think no...”更自然。