Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), remove redundancy, and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail using a linking word. For example, say you ‘‘had’’ a bike, mention its color or a memorable use, and avoid repeating that it was a present.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a beautiful red bike that my parents gave me when I was seven. It was my favorite toy, and I used it every day to ride around the neighborhood with my friends.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion first, use correct grammar and linking words, and give a specific reason or example. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases. Mention evidence, such as lack of bike lanes or cultural preferences, and conclude briefly.

Ví dụ: Not really. In my country bicycles are not very popular because there are almost no dedicated bike lanes, so people feel unsafe riding on busy roads. As a result, most people prefer cars or motorcycles for daily travel.

× Yes, when I was a child, I have a beautiful bike that my parents gave it to me when I was 7. It's a it was a present from them.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a beautiful bike that my parents gave me when I was seven; it was a present from them.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses ('when I was a child' requires past tense) and includes an unnecessary object pronoun ('gave it to me') after the verb 'gave' which already takes an object. Use the past simple 'had' to match the time reference, remove the redundant 'it' and use 'gave me'. Also streamline the repeated phrase 'It's a it was' into a single past statement. Suggestion: keep the tense consistent and avoid redundant pronouns (e.g., 'had a bike', 'gave me').

× Actually there aren't, because in my country, uh, there is not a specific road for the who's who wants ride the bike.

✓ Actually they are not very common, because in my country there are no specific lanes for people who want to ride bikes.

Original sentence misuses 'there aren't' without a clear subject and then repeats 'there is not' awkwardly. Use 'they are not very common' to refer back to 'bikes' or 'cycling lanes' correctly, or use 'there are no' with a plural noun. Also the phrase 'the who's who wants ride the bike' is ungrammatical: use 'people who want to ride bikes'. Correct preposition and verb forms: 'lanes for people who want to ride bikes'. Suggestion: identify the noun you refer to and use 'there is/there are' with correct number, and use relative clause 'people who want to ride bikes'.