Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Do you think bikes are popular popular in your country?

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1 you must answer directly with a clear topic sentence and then add one or two supporting details. Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and use correct grammar (e.g., include articles and tense). For example, start with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then add specific details about the bike (color, who gave it to you, how often you rode it) and use linking words if adding extra information.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because I practised a lot, I became quite confident riding on busy streets by the time I was ten.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. Provide a direct opinion first (e.g., “Yes, they are” or “No, not really”), then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, however, in contrast) to make your response coherent and include details such as who uses bikes, for what purpose, and any cultural or infrastructure factors that affect popularity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities. Many people use them for short commutes because of heavy traffic and limited parking; moreover, recent government initiatives to build bike lanes have encouraged more cyclists.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of articles / Sentence structure

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Grammar problem type ID:22 and 26. The sentence is missing the definite/indefinite article 'a' before 'child'. In English we say 'a child' to refer to a nonspecific child (yourself in the past). Also the phrase 'when you were a child' is the correct fixed structure. Suggestion: Always include the article 'a' with singular countable nouns when referring nonspecifically (e.g., 'a child', 'a student').

Incorrect word repetition

× Do you think bikes are popular popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Grammar problem type ID:26. The word 'popular' is accidentally repeated, which creates a sentence structure error. Remove the duplicated word to make the sentence grammatically correct. Suggestion: Proofread to catch repeated words; read sentences aloud to notice accidental duplications.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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