Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and precise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct vague phrasing, and add a specific detail or brief reason. Avoid redundancy and minor grammar errors. Use one or two linking words if adding extra detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. It was a bicycle made by a well-known Indian brand called Even, and I rode it every day between home and school. Because my house was only about ten minutes away, the bike was a convenient and quick way to travel.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence then add specific supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Correct plural and article errors, and explain why bikes are popular (cost, convenience, culture) to make your answer more informative.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, motorbikes are common among commuters because they are cheap to run and easy to park, while bicycles and tricycles are still used in rural areas for short trips and by children. Overall, affordability and traffic congestion make bikes a practical choice for many people.

× It was of even company which is a huge brand in India and I used to ride it every day from my school to my home.

✓ It was from Even Company, which is a huge brand in India, and I used to ride it every day from my school to my home.

The sentence has awkward preposition and company name phrasing. 'It was of even company' is incorrect English; use 'from' to indicate the maker/brand ('It was from Even Company'). Capitalize proper noun 'Even Company'. Add commas to set off the nonrestrictive clause 'which is a huge brand in India'. The past tense 'was' and 'used to ride' are correct for describing a past habitual action. Suggestion: write brand names with correct preposition and punctuation: 'It was from Even Company, which is a huge brand in India.'

× There are different kind of bikes in my country such as tricycles, bicycles, motorbikes and they are they belong to each age group.

✓ There are different kinds of bikes in my country, such as tricycles, bicycles and motorbikes, and they belong to every age group.

The phrase 'different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' when referring to multiple types (quantifier agreement). Remove the duplicated words 'they are they'. Use 'every age group' rather than 'each age group' for naturalness when speaking generally, though 'each' could also be acceptable. Add commas to separate the list and clauses. Ensure subject-verb agreement remains correct: 'kinds' with 'are' is correct. Suggestion: say 'different kinds of bikes' and avoid word duplication.