Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I got a bike when I was free and I got this by go to the park and play with my friend and yes, just just just.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本涉及了自行车和去公园,但语法、表达和流利度问题较多。首先要直接回答问题,例如“I had a bike when I was a child.” 其次,“when I was free”不准确,应改为“when I was a child”;“by go”应改为“by going”或直接说“I used it to go”。避免重复“just”,并使用连接词补充具体信息,例如说明在哪里骑、和谁一起骑以及骑车的感受。建议控制在2至4个清晰句子内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to the park and played with my friends there. It was a simple bike, but I really enjoyed riding it because it gave me a sense of freedom.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 回答没有完整表达观点,且缺少原因和具体细节。“Yes, I think”本身不完整,应改为“Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.” 然后补充至少一个原因,例如自行车价格相对便宜、方便短途出行或有助于锻炼。可以使用“because”连接理由,并举出具体使用场景,使答案更自然、更有效。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live near their workplaces. They are affordable and convenient for short trips. Many people also ride bikes to get some exercise.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× I got a bike when I was free and I got this by go to the park and play with my friend and yes, just just just.

✓ I got a bike when I was a child, and I used it to go to the park and play with my friend.

介词“by”后面如果接动词,动词需要使用“-ing”形式,例如“by going”。不过,原句中的“got this by going...”表达不自然,因此改为“used it to go...”更符合语境。这里“it”指代前面提到的自行车,使句子更清楚。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Free— Without charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
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