Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so mostly people are using them for going for rides and enjoying their weekends next to the coast.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est correcte et répond directement à la question, mais elle est trop courte pour montrer pleinement vos capacités en expression orale. Ajoutez une ou deux phrases avec des détails précis, par exemple à quel âge vous avez eu le vélo, à quelle fréquence vous l’utilisiez et où vous faisiez du vélo. Utilisez un lien logique comme « because » ou « especially » pour développer naturellement votre idée.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends. I especially enjoyed cycling in the park at weekends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Votre idée est pertinente, mais la structure grammaticale doit être améliorée. Après « I think so », utilisez une nouvelle proposition correctement construite, par exemple « Most people use them... ». Remplacez « for going for rides » par « to go for rides » ou « for recreational rides », et dites « along the coast » plutôt que « next to the coast » dans ce contexte. Organisez la réponse avec une phrase principale, une raison et un détail spécifique, en utilisant un connecteur comme « because ».

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for exercise and leisure. At weekends, families and young people often cycle along the coast, especially when the weather is pleasant.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I think so mostly people are using them for going for rides and enjoying their weekends next to the coast.

✓ Yes, I think so. Mostly, people use them to go for rides and enjoy their weekends by the coast.

The original sentence incorrectly joins two independent ideas without proper punctuation or a conjunction. A full stop should be used after 'I think so.' In addition, 'mostly' should be placed before the main clause or at the beginning of the sentence, and 'use them to go' is more natural than 'are using them for going' when describing a general habit. The verbs 'go' and 'enjoy' should also be parallel after 'to'.

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