Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I used to have a bike when I were a child. I'd like to ride my back after I finished my school work during my health work.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I see facts of hope you were. In my country, many people use them for short trips and, uh, commuting because they are cheap and convenient and shared bikes have become common in cities.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本切题,但有明显的语法、词汇和表达问题。应将“when I were”改为“when I was”,将“ride my back”改为“ride my bike”,并准确表达骑车的时间或目的;“during my health work”意思不清,建议改为“to stay healthy”或“for exercise”。此外,第一句使用“used to have”后,可以补充一个具体细节,使答案更自然、完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it after finishing my schoolwork, especially in the evenings. It was a great way to relax and get some exercise.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 答案的主要观点清楚,也提供了使用场景和原因,但开头“I see facts of hope you were”无法理解,应删除或改为直接回答“Yes, I think they are quite popular”。“and”连接多个原因略显重复,可以使用“especially”或“in addition”增强逻辑;还可以补充一个具体例子或结果,使内容更有效、更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips or commuting because they are cheap and convenient. In large cities, shared-bike services are especially common, and people often use them to travel from a subway station to their workplace.

Ngữ pháp

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× I used to have a bike when I were a child.

✓ I used to have a bike when I was a child.

主语是第一人称单数“I”,所以过去式 be 动词应使用“was”,不能使用“were”。“Were”通常与“you、we、they”连用。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Cheap— Inexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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