Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think the bags are probably in our country because it is convenient to go outside with but play with my friends.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 5.0Gợi ý: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,没有直接回答“有还是没有”。应先明确表达观点,例如“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”,然后补充一到两个具体细节,如买车的时间、骑车的地点或和谁一起骑。注意不要重复考官的问题。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was about six years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 你基本表达了“自行车很受欢迎,因为方便,而且可以和朋友一起玩”的意思,但“bags”应改为“bikes”,“are probably in our country”不自然,应说“are popular in my country”。句子结构较混乱,建议使用清晰的结构:先回答观点,再用“because”说明原因,最后给出具体场景或结果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive. Many children ride them to school or around their neighborhoods with their friends.
× Yes, I think the bags are probably in our country because it is convenient to go outside with but play with my friends.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are probably popular in our country because they are convenient for going outside and playing with my friends.
“but”表示转折,但句子表达的是并列关系,因此应改为“and”。使用连接词时,要根据上下文判断是并列、转折、因果还是选择关系。这里“going outside”和“playing with my friends”是两个并列的活动。
× Yes, I think the bags are probably in our country because it is convenient to go outside with but play with my friends.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are probably popular in our country because they are convenient for going outside and playing with my friends.
“bikes”是复数名词,所以不能用单数代词“it”指代,应使用复数代词“they”。另外,回答问题时应使用题目中的关键词“bikes”,并说“bikes are popular”,而不是“the bags are in our country”。