Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có cấu trúc tốt: trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó đưa ra hoạt động và lợi ích cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa “when I was child” thành “when I was a child” và giữ sự nhất quán về thì quá khứ: “cycle” nên đổi thành “cycled”. Có thể dùng từ “ride my bike around the neighborhood” tự nhiên hơn “cycle around”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had an old bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school and cycled around the neighborhood with my friends. It was enjoyable and gave me a great sense of freedom.

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có ví dụ, nhưng một số cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Nên đổi “use them to come to work” thành “use them to commute to work” hoặc “ride them to work”; “because they are cheap and avoid traffic” nên viết là “because cycling is affordable and helps them avoid traffic”. Cụm “drive by cycle” không đúng, cần dùng “cycle/ride to the market or a nearby office”.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many adults ride them to work because cycling is affordable and helps them avoid traffic jams. For example, people often cycle to local markets or nearby offices.

× Oh, I had my old bike when I was child.

✓ Oh, I had my old bike when I was a child.

The singular countable noun child requires the indefinite article a. Use a before a singular noun when referring to one person or thing in a general sense.

× I often rode to school and cycle around the neighborhood with my friends, which was fun and gave me more freedom.

✓ I often rode to school and cycled around the neighborhood with my friends, which was fun and gave me more freedom.

The question asks about the past, and the verb rode is in the past tense. The second coordinated verb should also be in the past tense: cycle becomes cycled. Keep parallel verbs in the same tense when describing events that happened in the past.