Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp và có thêm thông tin về việc đi xe đạp với bạn bè. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp: dùng “my parents bought me” thay vì “my parent was bought me”, và dùng thì quá khứ “rode” thay vì “ride” vì câu hỏi hỏi về thời thơ ấu. Cụm “Rd. interest” không rõ nghĩa, nên thay bằng địa điểm hoặc hoạt động cụ thể, chẳng hạn “around my neighborhood” hoặc “to nearby parks”. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp bằng “Yes, I did” và liên kết các ý bằng “because” hoặc “usually”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my parents bought me a bike, and I often rode it with my friends. We usually cycled around my neighborhood and went to nearby parks.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời trả lời đúng chủ đề và đưa ra lý do học sinh sử dụng xe đạp để đi học. Tuy nhiên, có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và ngữ pháp: sửa “in my in my country” thành “in my country”, “Bai” thành “bikes”, “use this” thành “use them”, và “use motorbike” thành “ride motorbikes”. Lý do “they can’t use motorbikes because they don’t know how” chưa tự nhiên và không phù hợp để mô tả toàn bộ người dân; nên tập trung vào trẻ em, học sinh hoặc những người muốn tiết kiệm chi phí. Câu trả lời cũng bị ngắt quãng và thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng, vì vậy nên nêu quan điểm trước, sau đó đưa ra một hoặc hai lý do cụ thể.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. Many children ride them to school because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. In addition, cycling is a healthy way to travel and helps people avoid traffic jams.

× When I was a child my parent was bought me a bike to ride with my friends and I usually ride Rd. interest and around my city.

✓ When I was a child, my parent bought me a bike to ride with my friends, and I usually rode around my city.

Because the answer describes past childhood habits, use the past tense. Bought is the correct active past-tense verb; was bought is passive and is incorrect here. Rode is the past tense of ride. Avoid unclear wording such as Rd. interest when describing movement around a city.

× When I was a child my parent was bought me a bike to ride with my friends and I usually ride Rd. interest and around my city.

✓ When I was a child, my parent bought me a bike to ride with my friends, and I usually rode around my city.

Use around to describe movement in different parts of a city. The original phrase does not use a correct preposition or a clear expression. Practice common movement phrases such as ride around the city and cycle around my neighborhood.

× Yes, in my in my country Bai is popular because students use this to go to school and all people usually use it because they can't use motorbike. They don't know how to use motorbike so they usually use bike and children

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are popular because students use them to go to school. Many people also use bikes because they do not use motorbikes. Children usually ride bikes, too.

The general topic is bikes, so use the plural noun bikes. The plural form is also needed for motorbikes when speaking about motorbikes in general. Use them to refer back to plural bikes, and use bikes after usually use.

× Yes, in my in my country Bai is popular because students use this to go to school and all people usually use it because they can't use motorbike. They don't know how to use motorbike so they usually use bike and children

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are popular because students use them to go to school. Many people also use bikes because they do not use motorbikes. Children usually ride bikes, too.

This and it are not appropriate because they refer to bikes in general, which is plural. Use them when referring to plural bikes. Avoid repeating unclear pronouns and name the noun when the meaning may be uncertain.

× Yes, in my in my country Bai is popular because students use this to go to school and all people usually use it because they can't use motorbike. They don't know how to use motorbike so they usually use bike and children

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are popular because students use them to go to school. Many people also use bikes because they do not use motorbikes. Children usually ride bikes, too.

Singular countable nouns need an article or another determiner. Say a motorbike or use the plural form motorbikes when speaking generally. The plural form bikes is also more natural than bike in the final clause.

× Yes, in my in my country Bai is popular because students use this to go to school and all people usually use it because they can't use motorbike. They don't know how to use motorbike so they usually use bike and children

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are popular because students use them to go to school. Many people also use bikes because they do not use motorbikes. Children usually ride bikes, too.

The final words, and children, do not form a complete sentence because they do not contain a verb. Add a verb, such as ride, to express the complete idea. Keep each sentence complete with a subject and a verb.

× Yes, in my in my country Bai is popular because students use this to go to school and all people usually use it because they can't use motorbike. They don't know how to use motorbike so they usually use bike and children

✓ Yes, in my country, bikes are popular because students use them to go to school. Many people also use bikes because they do not use motorbikes. Children usually ride bikes, too.

The subject bikes is plural, so the verb must agree with it: bikes are popular, not bikes is popular. Check whether the subject is singular or plural before choosing the verb form.