Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence: “Yes, I did.” Avoid unclear phrases such as “all the background child” and repeated ideas like “my childhood was good” and “I had a lot of fun.” Use the past tense consistently because you are talking about childhood; for example, use “I had” and “I used to ride.” Add one or two specific details about who you rode with or where you went, and use a linking word such as “also” or “because” to connect your ideas. Keep the answer to two or three clear sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a bike when I was about seven, and he often taught me how to ride it. I also used to go on bike rides with my friends around our neighborhood, so I have very happy memories of my childhood.

Gợi ý: Begin with a natural direct answer, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Avoid repetition of “very,” “it’s,” “a lot,” and “a very good price.” Use accurate collocations: say “an affordable form of transport” or “reasonably priced,” not “a very good price,” and say “people can afford them,” not “could afford it,” when discussing the present. Develop the answer with two clear reasons, such as convenience, affordability, and health benefits, using “because” or “as a result” to link them.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in cities. They are an affordable and convenient form of transport, and cycling also helps people stay fit. As a result, many people use bikes to commute or to exercise in their free time.

× Yes, all the background child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence does not contain a complete verb structure and is not clear. Use the past-tense verb had to answer the examiner's question directly.

× My dad used to play with it with me with the bike.

✓ My dad used to play with me using the bike.

The preposition with is repeated incorrectly. Using using the bike clearly shows how your father played with you.

× My child childhood was good.

✓ My childhood was good.

Child cannot modify childhood in this expression. Childhood already means the period when you were a child, so the word child should be removed.

× My I used to go out on bikes, bike rides with my friends and family and I have a lot of fun while uh.

✓ I used to go on bike rides with my friends and family, and I had a lot of fun.

The question asks about your childhood, so the past tense is required. Change have to had. Also, remove the extra word My and use go on bike rides as the natural expression.

× Yes bikes are very very popular in my country because it's a very easy transport a lot and it's it's very it's a it's a it's a very good price.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an easy form of transport and are available at a very good price.

The plural noun bikes must be referred to with the plural pronoun they, not it. The phrase an easy form of transport is grammatically complete and natural.

× it's in a very good price.

✓ They are available at a very good price.

Use the preposition at with price expressions, not in. The pronoun they correctly refers to bikes.

× A lot a lot of people could afford it and exercise while riding a bike.

✓ A lot of people can afford them and exercise while riding a bike.

The noun bikes is plural, so it should be replaced with the plural pronoun them. Because this sentence describes a general situation in the present, can is more suitable than could. Remove the repeated phrase a lot.