Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Is I don't think that bikes are popular in my country like India because many average people do use this bikes.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use the past tense consistently. Also, “bike” and “bicycle” have the same meaning, so saying that you did not have a bike but had a bicycle is contradictory. Add one specific detail, such as how you travelled or why you did not own one.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe, so I usually walked to school or went by bus.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence and avoid unnecessary words such as “Is.” The answer is difficult to understand because the reason seems to contradict your opinion. Use accurate plural forms, such as “bikes” rather than “this bikes,” and explain clearly whether ordinary people use bicycles often or not. Include a specific reason or comparison.

Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities like Mumbai. Although some people use them for short journeys, heavy traffic and a lack of safe cycling lanes discourage most people from riding.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a completed period in the past, so the past-tense auxiliary did not, or didn't, must be used instead of the present-tense form don't. Use the past tense consistently when describing childhood experiences.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Is I don't think that bikes are popular in my country like India because many average people do use this bikes.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country, unlike in India, because many average people use these bikes.

Is cannot be placed before the subject I in this statement. The sentence should begin directly with the subject and verb: I don't think. Also, do use is unnecessary here because the sentence is not emphasizing the verb. Build statements with a clear subject followed by the main verb.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Is I don't think that bikes are popular in my country like India because many average people do use this bikes.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country, unlike in India, because many average people use these bikes.

Bikes is plural, so it must be modified by the plural demonstrative these, not the singular demonstrative this. Use this with one item and these with more than one item.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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