Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời chưa diễn đạt rõ ý và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng cũng như cách dùng từ. “When I try I have to buy” không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh; em có thể nói “When I was a child, my mother bought me a bike”. Ngoài ra, “have the public transport to move to the school” nên được thay bằng “to get to school” hoặc “to travel to school”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp ở câu đầu, sau đó thêm một lý do hoặc chi tiết cụ thể; đồng thời hạn chế các từ ngập ngừng như “uh” và “actually”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me so that I could ride it to school. It was a convenient and enjoyable way to get around.

Gợi ý: Em có ý đúng là xe đạp phổ biến với học sinh, nhưng câu trả lời khó hiểu vì thiếu cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều từ lặp/ngập ngừng như “actually”, “umm”, “uh” và “which”. “The student usually is buy” nên sửa thành “students usually ride bikes” hoặc “many students use bicycles”. “Suitable for the star student and children” không tự nhiên; nên dùng “suitable for students and children”. Em cần mở đầu bằng câu trả lời rõ ràng, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể như chi phí thấp, thân thiện với môi trường hoặc thuận tiện cho những quãng đường ngắn.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. Many children ride them to school because they are affordable and convenient for short distances. However, fewer people use bikes in big cities because of heavy traffic.

× Just actually, uh, when I try I have to buy because my mom bought it for me and want me to have the public transport to move to the school.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I did not have to buy a bike because my mom bought one for me, and she wanted me to use it to go to school.

The question refers to the past, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use was instead of try, did not have to instead of have to, and wanted instead of want. When describing a past situation, keep the relevant verbs consistently in the past tense.

× Just actually, uh, when I try I have to buy because my mom bought it for me and want me to have the public transport to move to the school.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I did not have to buy a bike because my mom bought one for me, and she wanted me to use it to go to school.

The natural expression is go to school, not move to the school. Go to school describes traveling to school, whereas move usually means changing residence or physically relocating something.

× Just actually, uh, when I try I have to buy because my mom bought it for me and want me to have the public transport to move to the school.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I did not have to buy a bike because my mom bought one for me, and she wanted me to use it to go to school.

Public transport is generally used without the definite article when referring to transportation as a general means of travel. Also, school does not normally take the when it refers to the usual activity of attending school.

× Just actually, uh, when I try I have to buy because my mom bought it for me and want me to have the public transport to move to the school.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I did not have to buy a bike because my mom bought one for me, and she wanted me to use it to go to school.

The original sentence contains an incomplete and unclear clause beginning with when I try. A clear sentence should have a subject and a complete verb phrase in each clause. The revised version organizes the ideas with because and and.

× He actually just because in my country, umm, the student uh, usually is buy to go to school because it's a vehicle which which is MMM, student care, uh, which is suitable for the star student and children.

✓ Actually, yes. In my country, students usually buy bikes to go to school because bikes are suitable vehicles for students and children.

Students and bikes are plural nouns because the sentence refers to people and bicycles in general. The singular forms student and vehicle do not agree with this general plural meaning.

× He actually just because in my country, umm, the student uh, usually is buy to go to school because it's a vehicle which which is MMM, student care, uh, which is suitable for the star student and children.

✓ Actually, yes. In my country, students usually buy bikes to go to school because bikes are suitable vehicles for students and children.

For a general fact about the present situation in the country, use the simple present: students usually buy bikes. The form is buy, not is buy. The verb be is unnecessary before the main verb buy.

× He actually just because in my country, umm, the student uh, usually is buy to go to school because it's a vehicle which which is MMM, student care, uh, which is suitable for the star student and children.

✓ Actually, yes. In my country, students usually buy bikes to go to school because bikes are suitable vehicles for students and children.

The original response has an incomplete opening, repeated relative clauses, and unclear expressions. Begin with a complete answer such as Actually, yes, and then use two logically connected clauses to explain why bikes are popular.