Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't have a bike because in my child I don't like to ride a bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, because when I was a child most of the children liked to play computer games or phone or watch TV. So I didn't see much bikes
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,但时态和表达不准确。“I don't have”应改为过去时“I didn't have”,“in my child”应改为“when I was a child”,而“didn't like riding a bike”比“don't like to ride a bike”更符合语境。建议补充一个具体原因,使答案更自然、更完整。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t interested in cycling. I preferred playing indoors, especially with toys and video games. Looking back, I wish I had learned to ride one because cycling is a fun way to stay healthy.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答有观点和原因,但内容与问题的现在时不完全匹配:你主要描述了童年时期,应该说明现在自行车是否流行。注意搭配和语法:“play computer games on their phones”或“use their phones”,“much bikes”应改为“many bikes”。建议使用“However”或“For example”连接对比,并提供更具体的现状细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among children and young adults. However, many people still prefer using cars or public transport because the roads can be busy and cycling lanes are limited. For example, more people ride bikes in parks or at weekends than during their daily commute.
× No, I don't have a bike because in my child I don't like to ride a bike.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike because, during my childhood, I didn't like riding a bike.
问题发生在过去(“when you were a child”),所以应该使用一般过去时:用 “didn't have” 替代 “don't have”,用 “didn't like” 替代 “don't like”。回答过去经历时,要注意保持整句话的时态一致。
× No, I don't have a bike because in my child I don't like to ride a bike.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike because, during my childhood, I didn't like riding a bike.
“in my child” 不是正确的表达。“child”指孩子,而这里想表达“在我童年时期”,应使用 “during my childhood” 或 “when I was a child”。建议记住固定表达 “during my childhood”。
× No, I don't have a bike because in my child I don't like to ride a bike.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike because, during my childhood, I didn't like riding a bike.
在 “like” 后面可以接动词的-ing形式。这里使用 “like riding a bike” 更自然。建议掌握结构 “like/love/enjoy + 动词-ing”,例如 “I enjoy playing football”。
× No, because when I was a child most of the children liked to play computer games or phone or watch TV.
✓ No, because when I was a child, most children liked to play computer games, use their phones, or watch TV.
原句中 “or phone or watch TV” 的连接不平行,且 “phone” 不能这样直接表示“使用手机”。列举多个活动时,应使用平行结构:“play computer games, use their phones, or watch TV”。
× No, because when I was a child most of the children liked to play computer games or phone or watch TV.
✓ No, because when I was a child, most children liked to play computer games, use their phones, or watch TV.
这里描述的是过去的童年时期,动词应保持过去时。句中的 “liked” 已经是过去时;修改后的列举动词使用 “play/use/watch” 是因为它们位于 “liked to” 后面,应使用动词原形。
× So I didn't see much bikes.
✓ So I didn't see many bikes.
“bikes” 是可数名词复数,修饰可数名词复数应使用 “many”,不能使用修饰不可数名词的 “much”。例如:“many cars”,但 “much water”。