Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Do you have a bike when you are a child? Yes, I have a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I know the bike and the bikes are very popular in our country because our country is uh, developing country and a small country and so many people are poor. That's why they live there, uh, live.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and use the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Avoid repeating or changing the examiner's question. Use “had” for possession in the past and add one specific detail, such as how you used the bike or where you rode it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 38.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Avoid unnatural phrases like “I know the bike” and repeated words such as “live.” Use linking words to organize your reasons, and give specific, respectful explanations. For example, mention that bikes are affordable, convenient, and useful in crowded cities instead of simply saying that many people are poor.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They are relatively affordable and convenient, especially in crowded cities where traffic can be heavy. Many people use them for commuting because they are also an economical and environmentally friendly form of transport.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Do you have a bike when you are a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The question refers to a past time, so use the past-tense auxiliary did and the past form were. Do and are are present-tense forms.

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

Because the question asks about the student's childhood, the answer should also use the past tense. Change have to had.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I know the bike and the bikes are very popular in our country

✓ Yes, I know that bikes are very popular in our country.

The general topic is bikes, so use the plural noun bikes without the singular noun bike. The conjunction that also makes the sentence structure more natural after know.

22: Article errors

× because our country is uh, developing country and a small country

✓ because our country is a developing country and a small country

Singular countable nouns such as country need an article. Use a before developing country. The article a before small country is already correct.

26: Sentence structure errors

× That's why they live there, uh, live.

✓ That is why many people ride bikes.

The original ending is incomplete and repeats the verb live. It also does not clearly express why bikes are popular. Use a complete sentence with the subject many people and the verb ride.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Poor— Poverty-stricken; Substandard; Meager; Unproductive; Deficient in
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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