Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I have, my mother bought a buy to me when I was 7 years old and my brother helped me to learn how to write it and it was interesting that I can write a bike after a week.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so. Uh, especially in the countryside, many student have a bike and they ride a bike, go to the go to school and also they have to do by their own in the first year.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly in the past tense: say “Yes, I did” rather than “Yes, I have.” Correct the vocabulary and collocations: use “bought me a bike,” “learn to ride it,” and “ride a bike,” not “bought a buy,” “write it,” or “write a bike.” Organize the answer into a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, and use a linking word such as “Fortunately” or “After that.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a bike when I was seven, and my older brother taught me how to ride it. Fortunately, I learned within a week, so I was able to cycle around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear general answer first, then explain where and why bikes are popular. Use correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms: “many students have bikes.” Replace unclear phrases such as “go to the go to school” and “they have to do by their own” with precise expressions like “ride to school independently.” Add a specific reason or comparison, such as lower traffic and shorter distances in rural areas.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Many students ride them to school because the roads are less crowded and they often live relatively close to their schools. In cities, however, people tend to use buses or motorbikes because the traffic is much heavier.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question asks about a past experience using Did you have...? Therefore, the answer should use the past auxiliary did, not the present perfect form have. Use Yes, I did or No, I did not for past simple yes/no questions.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× My mother bought a buy to me when I was 7 years old.

✓ My mother bought a buy for me when I was 7 years old.

The usual preposition used with buy something for someone is for, not to. Use buy something for someone when describing a purchase intended for another person.

5: Past tense issue

× It was interesting that I can write a bike after a week.

✓ It was interesting that I could write a bike after a week.

The sentence describes an ability in the past, so can should change to its past form could. Use could when referring to an ability someone had in the past.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Many student have a bike.

✓ Many students have a bike.

Many must be followed by a plural countable noun. Therefore, student must become students. Remember to use many students, many books, and many cars.

26: Sentence structure errors

× They ride a bike, go to the go to school.

✓ They ride a bike and go to school.

The original sentence contains a repeated and incorrectly ordered phrase: go to the go to school. Remove the repeated words and use the parallel structure ride a bike and go to school.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× They have to do by their own in the first year.

✓ They have to do it on their own in the first year.

The verb do needs an object pronoun in this context, so use it. The phrase meaning independently is on their own, not by their own. Use do it on their own to describe completing something independently.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× They have to do by their own in the first year.

✓ They have to do it on their own in the first year.

The fixed expression is on their own, meaning independently. Do not use by their own in this expression. Learn common fixed prepositional phrases as complete units.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Interesting— Absorbing
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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