Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike but I don't use it anymore.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it is very popular, but most of the time we use cars or don't use bikes.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: إجابتك مباشرة وواضحة، لكن عبارة «I don't use it anymore» تتحدث عن الحاضر، بينما السؤال عن فترة الطفولة. استخدم الماضي بشكل أدق، مثل «I had a bike when I was a child» أو «I used to ride it». أضف سبباً أو تفصيلاً قصيراً، واستخدم أداة ربط مثل «because» لجعل الإجابة أكثر ثراءً وطبيعية.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood. I stopped using it when I got older because I became more interested in other activities.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: تحتاج الإجابة إلى تصحيح الضمير؛ كلمة «bikes» جمع، لذلك استخدم «they are» بدلاً من «it is». يوجد أيضاً تناقض بين قولك إنها شائعة ثم قولك إن معظم الناس لا يستخدمونها؛ وضّح أن الدراجات معروفة أو محبوبة، لكنها أقل استخداماً من السيارات. أضف سبباً محدداً، مثل الطقس الحار أو عدم توفر مسارات للدراجات، واستخدم رابطاً مثل «however».

Ví dụ: Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and fitness enthusiasts. However, most adults use cars because the weather is often hot and many cities do not have safe cycling lanes.

Ngữ pháp

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, it is very popular, but most of the time we use cars or don't use bikes.

✓ Yes, they are very popular, but most of the time we use cars instead of bikes.

The noun bikes is plural, so it must be replaced by the plural pronoun they, not the singular pronoun it. The verb must also agree with the plural subject: they are. Using instead of makes the contrast between cars and bikes clearer and more natural.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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