Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did. I have a really beautiful bike when I was a child. I always rode my beautiful bike in my spare time, especially after school. I always rode my bike with my partners.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I think bikes are really popular in our country. Almost everyone in our country has his own bikes. They rode ride their bikes every.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答基本切题,也提供了骑车的时间和同伴等细节。但“when I was a child”描述过去,应将“have”改为“had”;“beautiful bike”重复出现,可以用“it”替代;“partners”不适合表示一起玩耍的朋友,建议使用“friends”。另外,可以加入一个具体描述或结果,并使用“especially”或“so”使信息衔接更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a beautiful blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it with my friends after school. It was a great way to relax and spend time outdoors.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,但存在明显的语法和表达问题。“his own bikes”应改为“their own bike”或“a bike”,“They rode ride”是重复和时态错误,应改为“They ride”,最后一句“every”不完整,应补充“every day”。同时,“our country”重复出现,可以用“where I live”替代。建议加入具体原因,例如自行车价格低、方便通勤或有助于环保,并用“because”连接。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular where I live because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. Many people ride them to work or school every day, especially in crowded cities.
× I have a really beautiful bike when I was a child.
✓ I had a really beautiful bike when I was a child.
“when I was a child”表示过去的时间,因此主句也应该使用过去时。将“have”改为“had”。
× Almost everyone in our country has his own bikes.
✓ Almost everyone in our country has his own bike.
“everyone”表示每一个人,在语法上是单数,因此这里应使用单数名词“bike”,而不是复数“bikes”。
× They rode ride their bikes every.
✓ They ride their bikes every day.
这句话描述的是经常发生的习惯,应使用一般现在时“ride”,而不是过去时“rode”。另外,“every”后面需要接时间名词,因此应说“every day”。
× They rode ride their bikes every.
✓ They ride their bikes every day.
原句中“rode”和“ride”重复使用,造成动词结构错误;同时“every”后缺少“day”,导致句子不完整。应改为完整结构“They ride their bikes every day”。