Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

That is an interesting question. When I was a child, uh, I preferred uh, road bike to other kinds of toys. I still like, uh, road bike almost every day now. It always makes me feel happy and brings back wonderful.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

That is an interesting question. Uh, the bike is really popular, uh, in South Korea. Uh, bike is one of the most, uh, popular, uh, tools in South Korea. I usually ride a bike for about two hours.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question more directly by clearly stating whether you had a bike as a child. Avoid unnecessary fillers such as “uh” and the phrase “That is an interesting question,” which sounds unnatural for a simple Part 1 question. Use correct articles and plural forms: say “a road bike” or “bikes,” not “road bike” and “the road bike.” Also, complete the final idea by saying what wonderful memories or feelings the bike brings back. Add one specific detail, such as where you rode it or who you rode with.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I preferred riding a road bike to playing with other toys because it allowed me to explore my neighborhood with my friends. I still ride my bike almost every day, and it brings back wonderful memories of my childhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion at the beginning, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular in South Korea.” Avoid repeating “popular” and “bike,” and do not describe a bike as a “tool”; use “means of transportation,” “form of exercise,” or “leisure activity” instead. Support your opinion with specific reasons, such as cycling along rivers, exercising, or commuting. Use linking words like “because” and “for example,” and make sure the final sentence explains your personal experience rather than appearing unrelated.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in South Korea, especially among people who enjoy exercising outdoors. Many people ride along rivers or in parks because cycling is a convenient and healthy activity. For example, I usually ride for about two hours at the weekend to keep fit and enjoy the scenery.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× When I was a child, uh, I preferred uh, road bike to other kinds of toys.

✓ When I was a child, uh, I preferred a road bike to other kinds of toys.

Road bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article a when it is mentioned for the first time. Place a before road bike.

22: Article errors

× I still like, uh, road bike almost every day now.

✓ I still like, uh, a road bike almost every day now.

Road bike is a singular countable noun and needs an article. Use a before it when referring to a road bike in general or one road bike.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It always makes me feel happy and brings back wonderful.

✓ It always makes me feel happy and brings back wonderful memories.

Wonderful is an adjective, so it must describe a noun. The sentence needs the noun memories after wonderful. The phrase brings back wonderful memories means that the bike causes you to remember pleasant experiences.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Uh, the bike is really popular, uh, in South Korea.

✓ Uh, bikes are really popular in South Korea.

When talking about bicycles as a general category, use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular the bike. The plural form makes the general meaning clear.

22: Article errors

× Uh, bike is one of the most, uh, popular, uh, tools in South Korea.

✓ Uh, a bike is one of the most popular tools in South Korea.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article a. Use a bike when referring to one example of the general category. The unnecessary filler words have also been removed for a more natural sentence.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Happy— Cheerful; Glad; Fortunate
Interesting— Absorbing
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Wonderful— Marvelous
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