Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do. I think bags is very important in our country and in our country many people like spikes because bike is is good for our health.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 95.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接、语法正确,非常自然。由于这是一个简单的事实问题,可以适当补充一个简短细节,例如说明你何时骑车或用自行车做什么,但不需要说得太长。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was about six, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你表达了“自行车很受欢迎,因为有益健康”的主要观点,但存在多处影响理解的错误:应使用“bikes”而不是“bags”或“spikes”;“bikes are important/popular”中的主谓一致要正确;“bike is is”需要删除一个“is”;“in our country”重复出现,建议只保留一次。可以先直接回答,再用“because”或“also”补充具体原因,例如健康、环保或缓解交通拥堵。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are good for people’s health and environmentally friendly. Many people also use them to avoid traffic jams.

Ngữ pháp

1: Singular and plural issue;27: Subject-verb agreement errors(单复数问题;主谓一致错误)

× Yes, I do. I think bags is very important in our country and in our country many people like spikes because bike is is good for our health.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are very important in our country, and many people like bikes because bikes are good for our health.

“Bikes”是复数主语,后面应该使用复数动词“are”,不能使用“is”。“bike”也应改为复数“bikes”,因为这里是在泛指自行车。原句中的“is is”是重复使用动词,应该删去一个,并根据复数主语改为“are”。另外,结合问题语境,“bags”和“spikes”应为“bikes”;这属于词汇或听写问题,但为了使答案符合问题含义,已一并改正。句中两次出现“in our country”表达重复,因此删除了一次,使句子更自然。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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