Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes. I did. I remember when I was a kid and uh my father bought to me uh red one. I really like it and uh, I remember my first attempt trying to uh use this bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course they are, especially in cities like you, Claro in Sao Paulo, that we can use bikes to everything, go to supermarket, go to work, go to school. So they are especially useful in some specific regions without monctics, for example.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and then add one or two specific details. Correct the word order and verb tense: say “my father bought me a red one” and “I really liked it.” Avoid fillers such as “uh,” and use a more natural expression such as “my first attempt to ride it” instead of “my first attempt trying to use this bike.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my father bought me a red bike, and I really liked it. I still remember my first attempt to ride it because I found it difficult to balance, but I gradually became more confident.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear answer and organize the supporting details with linking words such as “because” and “for example.” Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases: say “in cities such as São Paulo” rather than “cities like you, Claro,” “use bikes for many activities” rather than “use bikes to everything,” and “areas without good public transport” if that is your intended meaning. Include one specific reason why bicycles are popular.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities such as São Paulo. They are useful for commuting to work or school and for avoiding heavy traffic. In addition, they are an affordable and environmentally friendly form of transport, particularly in areas with limited public transportation.

Ngữ pháp

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× My father bought to me a red one.

✓ My father bought me a red one.

The verb buy does not require the preposition to before the recipient when the recipient comes directly after the verb. Use the pattern buy someone something: bought me a red one.

22: Article errors

× My father bought me red one.

✓ My father bought me a red one.

A singular countable noun such as one needs an article. Use a because this is one unspecified red bike.

5: Past tense issue

× I really like it.

✓ I really liked it.

The speaker is describing a past experience from childhood, so the past-tense form liked is more consistent with the surrounding past-tense verbs was and bought.

8: Verb + -ing form

× My first attempt trying to use this bike.

✓ My first attempt to use this bike.

After the noun attempt, use the infinitive with to when describing the purpose or action attempted: attempt to use. Do not use attempt trying in this structure.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× We can use bikes to everything.

✓ We can use bikes for everything.

Use the preposition for to express purpose or function. Bikes can be used for everything, not to everything.

22: Article errors

× Go to supermarket, go to work, go to school.

✓ Go to the supermarket, go to work, and go to school.

Supermarket is a singular countable noun referring to a particular type of place, so it needs the definite article the. Work and school can be used without an article when referring to their general activities or purposes.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

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