Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Well have a run. When I'm birthday party, my mother bought a bike for me and she tried to taught me how to ride a bike but I can't end learning how to bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well, really not because people always buy car to go work and just a little student to ride a bike. So I think like countries don't pop learning rates.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答基本涉及了问题,但开头“Well have a run”不自然,可能想表达“Well, yes”。时态和语法错误较多:应使用“On my birthday”“bought”“tried to teach”“couldn’t learn”。最后的“how to bike”表达不准确,应说“how to ride a bike”。建议先直接回答,再补充购买时间、母亲教你以及最终结果;使用“but”连接转折,控制在2—3句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a bike for my birthday and tried to teach me how to ride it. However, I couldn’t quite learn because I found it difficult to keep my balance.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了“不太流行”的观点,但句子结构和词汇问题较多。“buy car”应为“buy cars”,“go work”应为“go to work”,“just a little student”应改为“only a few students”。“countries don't pop learning rates”无法表达清楚,可能想说“bikes are not very popular”。建议先明确回答,再给出一个具体原因,并使用“because”或“whereas”建立逻辑关系。
Ví dụ: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer to drive cars to work because it is more convenient and saves time. Only a small number of students ride bikes, mainly for short trips.
× Well have a run.
✓ Well, I had one.
问题发生在过去,所以要使用一般过去时。把现在时 have 改为过去式 had。这里用 had one 比 have a run 更符合问题“你小时候有自行车吗”的语境。
× When I'm birthday party
✓ When I was at my birthday party
这是在讲小时候发生的事情,因此要用过去时 was,而不能用现在时 am。表示“在生日聚会上”时,还需要使用介词 at。
× When I'm birthday party
✓ When I was at my birthday party
表示参加或处于某个活动、场合时,通常使用介词 at,例如 at my birthday party。不能直接说 I was my birthday party。
× she tried to taught me how to ride a bike
✓ She tried to teach me how to ride a bike.
try to 后面要接动词原形,因此应使用 teach,而不是过去式 taught。虽然 tried 是过去式,但 to teach 中的 teach 不需要变成过去式。
× but I can't end learning how to bike
✓ But I couldn't learn how to ride a bike.
这件事发生在过去,所以情态动词 can 要改为过去式 could;否定形式应为 couldn't。couldn't 后面接动词原形 learn。
× people always buy car to go work
✓ People usually buy cars to go to work.
people 是复数主语,泛指汽车时应使用复数 cars,而不是单数 car。
× people always buy car to go work
✓ People usually buy cars to go to work.
go to work 是固定表达,表示“去上班”。work 前需要介词 to。
× just a little student to ride a bike
✓ Only a few students ride bikes.
student 是可数名词,表示“少数几个学生”时要用 a few,而不能用修饰不可数名词的 a little。同时,数量很少的学生应使用复数 students。
× and just a little student to ride a bike
✓ and only a few students ride bikes
原句中 students 后面的 to ride 不能充当完整句子的谓语。需要使用一般现在时谓语 ride,构成完整的主谓结构:students ride bikes。
× just a little student to ride a bike
✓ Only a few students ride bikes.
a few 后面必须接可数名词复数,因此要用 students。泛指自行车时也可以使用复数 bikes。
× So I think like countries don't pop learning rates.
✓ So I don't think bikes are popular in my country.
原句的词语排列和句子结构不完整,don't pop learning rates 不能表达“自行车在我的国家不流行”。可以使用 think 后接完整从句:I don't think bikes are popular in my country。