Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was little. My parents bought me a bright blue bike with two main wholes and two training wheels which help me learn to drive
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think Baik is very popular in some big cities like Beijing Shanghai in China. This is because they are very cheap and convenient and also environmentally friendly.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答直接,且加入了颜色和父母购买等细节,内容基本完整。主要问题是词汇和语法:应使用“two wheels and two training wheels”,而不是“two main wholes”;“which help”应改为过去时“which helped”;骑自行车应说“learn to ride”,而不是“learn to drive”。此外,答案最好以完整句号结尾,并使用“because”或“so”连接细节,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was little, my parents bought me a bright blue bike with two wheels and two training wheels. The training wheels helped me learn to ride, so I gradually became more confident on a bicycle.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,也提供了原因,符合基本结构。需要注意“bike”或“bikes”的发音和拼写;城市列举应说“Beijing and Shanghai”,不能直接连续使用两个城市名。建议使用“bikes are”保持主谓一致,并加入逗号和连接词,例如“Moreover”或“because”。“cheap, convenient, and environmentally friendly”是自然且有效的并列表达。还可以补充共享单车或短途出行这一具体例子,让内容更加丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China, especially in large cities such as Beijing and Shanghai. They are relatively cheap, convenient, and environmentally friendly. In addition, many people use shared bikes for short trips or to get to the subway.
× My parents bought me a bright blue bike with two main wholes and two training wheels which help me learn to drive.
✓ My parents bought me a bright blue bike with two main wholes and two training wheels which helped me learn to drive.
主句使用了一般过去时“bought”,描述的是童年时期发生的事情,因此关系从句中的“help”也应使用过去式“helped”,表示这些训练轮当时帮助我学习骑车。建议在叙述过去经历时,保持相关动词的时态一致。
× I think Baik is very popular in some big cities like Beijing Shanghai in China.
✓ I think bikes are very popular in some big cities like Beijing Shanghai in China.
“bike”是可数名词。这里表达的是自行车这一类交通工具在城市中很受欢迎,所以应使用复数“bikes”,并搭配复数动词“are”。建议谈论某一类事物时,通常使用“复数名词 + are”。
× I think Baik is very popular in some big cities like Beijing Shanghai in China.
✓ I think bikes are very popular in some big cities like Beijing and Shanghai in China.
“Beijing”和“Shanghai”是两个并列的城市,需要使用连词“and”连接。列举两个或多个并列项目时,应在最后一个项目之前使用“and”。