Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答切题，并且提供了颜色偏好和选择黑色自行车的原因，内容比较具体。但要注意语法：every children应改为every child；in their childhood表达不自然，可改为when they are young；easy to be dirty应改为easy to get dirty。句子较长，but重复使用，建议用However或because连接，并减少“I think”的重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a black bike when I was a child. I actually wanted a pink one, but I chose black because pink gets dirty more easily. It was practical and easy to maintain.

Gợi ý: 回答开头直接，但后面的语法和内容影响了表达清晰度。When I wandering应改为When I wander或When I am walking；many people riding bikes最好改为many people riding their bikes；One of my children he存在主语重复，而且running by really much意思不清，可能想表达“非常喜欢骑车”，应改为One of my children loves riding bikes very much。建议补充一个具体原因或场景，并使用because、for example等连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, when I walk in a park, I often see many people riding around the lake. Many people use bikes for exercise and relaxation, and my child especially enjoys riding one at the weekend.

× I think every children will have a bike in their childhood.

✓ I think every child had a bike in their childhood.

“Every”后面必须接单数可数名词，因此“children”应改为“child”。此外，这段经历发生在过去，所以“will have”应改为过去时“had”。

× I think every children will have a bike in their childhood.

✓ I think every child had a bike in their childhood.

题目询问学生小时候的经历，回答应使用过去时。“will have”表示将来，不符合语境，应改为“had”。同时，“every”后应使用单数名词“child”。

× I have a black bike but I wanted a pink bike actually but I think the pink bike is easy to be dirty, so I chose a black bike.

✓ I had a black bike, but I wanted a pink bike. However, I thought the pink bike was easy to get dirty, so I chose a black bike.

学生描述的是童年时的自行车经历，因此应统一使用过去时：“have”改为“had”，“think”改为“thought”，“is”改为“was”。另外，“easy to be dirty”不符合自然表达，通常说“easy to get dirty”。

× When I wandering in the park, I always see many people riding bikes around the lake.

✓ When I wander in the park, I always see many people riding bikes around the lake.

“I”作主语时，表示经常性活动应使用一般现在时，动词应为“wander”。“wandering”是现在分词，不能单独作谓语。

× One of my children he loves running by really much.

✓ One of my children loves running very much.

“One of my children”已经是完整的主语，后面不需要再加代词“he”。重复使用主语会造成句子结构错误，因此应删除“he”。

× One of my children he loves running by really much.

✓ One of my children loves running very much.

“Really much”不是修饰动词“loves”的自然表达。表示“非常喜欢”时，应使用“love ... very much”。同时应删除多余的“he”。