Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Hmm. MMM.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think bags are popular in my country because. Bike. When you want to go somewhere. Not not far away in your home.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且语法基本正确,但“Hm”和“MMM”属于无意义停顿,会影响自然度。可以在否定回答后补充一个具体原因或相关经历,并使用“because”连接细节。建议控制在2—3句,例如说明家里没有买自行车,或者你小时候通常步行、乘公交车出行。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents didn’t buy one because we lived in a busy city, so I usually walked or took the bus.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答中将“bikes”说成了“bags”,导致意思错误;同时句子不完整,缺少清晰的主题句和逻辑连接。应先明确回答“Yes, they are”或“No, they aren’t”,然后说明原因,例如自行车适合短途出行、价格便宜或有助于环保。注意使用完整句子,如“People use bikes when they want to travel somewhere nearby”,不要说“in your home”,因为这里应表达“near their homes”或“nearby”。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They are affordable and convenient, and many people use them to go to nearby shops or commute to work.
× I think bags are popular in my country because. Bike. When you want to go somewhere. Not not far away in your home.
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because people can use them to go somewhere that is not far away from their homes.
原句中“because”后面没有完整的从句,后面的“Bike.”、“When you want to go somewhere.”和“Not not far away in your home.”也都是不完整的句子或句子片段。需要把这些片段合并成一个结构完整的句子。这里将“bags”改为“bikes”是根据上下文推测的用词错误,并非本题语法问题列表中的错误。
× Not not far away in your home.
✓ It is not far away from your home.
表示“离某地不远”时,应使用“far away from”,而不是“far away in”。另外,“not not”是重复否定,应改为一个“not”。