Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, unfortunately I don't. I didn't have any bike when I was a child, but uh, my father bought me a bike when I was 12 years old. I wasn't a kid anymore. I was a teenager. Uh, so as a child I didn't have any bike. Uh, that's it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Of course they are. They are absolutely popular in my country, especially in some cities, uh, at the northern side name bubble, they are very popular because it's a small city and uh, other transport vehicles such as cars or bus, uh, cannot fit in a small city like that in a small.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly using the past tense: “No, I didn’t.” Avoid repeating the same idea several times and remove fillers such as “uh” and “that’s it.” Also, saying that you were not a child at 12 is unnecessary and sounds slightly unnatural. Add one specific reason or feeling to make the answer more developed, such as whether you enjoyed learning to ride the bike.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was very young. My father bought me one when I was 12, so I learned to ride it as a teenager. I was really excited because I could ride to school and visit my friends independently.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear, natural opening such as “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular.” Avoid repeating “popular” and remove fillers. The name and location of the city are unclear, so state them accurately or describe the place without an uncertain phrase. Use correct forms such as “cars and buses” and explain the connection more clearly: bikes are convenient because the city has narrow streets and heavy traffic. Include a specific example to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. For example, in some northern cities, the streets are narrow and often crowded, so cycling is more convenient than driving. Bikes are also affordable and environmentally friendly, which makes them a practical form of transport.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× No, unfortunately I don't.

✓ No, unfortunately, I didn't.

The examiner asks about the past, using Did you have...? Therefore, the answer should also use the past auxiliary did. Use didn't instead of don't when answering a question about a past situation.

22: Article errors

× I didn't have any bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs a determiner. In this sentence, a bike is the natural choice. Use a or an with a singular countable noun when referring to one nonspecific item.

22: Article errors

× Uh, so as a child I didn't have any bike.

✓ So, as a child, I didn't have a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun and cannot normally be used without a determiner. Use a bike to mean one nonspecific bike. Also, commas help separate the introductory phrase as a child.

1: Singular and plural issue

× Other transport vehicles such as cars or bus cannot fit in a small city like that.

✓ Other transport vehicles, such as cars or buses, cannot fit in a small city like that.

The noun cars is plural, so the parallel noun should also be plural: buses, not bus. When listing examples joined by or, keep the nouns grammatically parallel.

26: Sentence structure errors

× They are very popular because it's a small city and other transport vehicles such as cars or bus cannot fit in a small city like that in a small.

✓ They are very popular because it is a small city, and other vehicles, such as cars and buses, cannot fit easily in a city that small.

The original sentence ends with the incomplete phrase in a small, which makes the sentence structurally incomplete. Finish the comparison with a complete phrase such as a city that small. The revised sentence also avoids repeating small city unnecessarily.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Fit— Suitable; Healthy; Equip; Join; Match
Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Small— Little; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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