Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was seven years old.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. Most people write it to go to school or go to work.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且语法基本正确,但内容过于简短,只有一个事实,缺少原因、用途或具体细节。可以在回答后补充你在哪里骑车、和谁一起骑,以及这辆自行车给你的感受。建议使用“because”“especially”或“for example”等连接词,使答案更加自然丰富。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven years old. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends after school. It was a bright red bike, and I felt really excited whenever I rode it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答的观点很明确,但“write it”应改为“ride them”或“ride bikes”,因为bike是可数名词复数,不能用it指代。除此之外,表达“go to school or go to work”略显重复,可以补充自行车受欢迎的具体原因,例如价格便宜、环保、避免交通拥堵,并使用“because”连接理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. Many students ride them to school, while adults often use them to commute to work and avoid traffic jams.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
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