Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, then describe the bike using accurate past-tense forms. “Horse bike” is not the correct expression; say “a bicycle” or “a bike.” Avoid restarting sentences, and replace unclear phrases such as “jealous sets” with the intended word, probably “wheel sets” or “training wheels.” Use a clear comparison, such as “Compared with my current bike, it was much smaller.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My uncle bought it for me when I was about six years old. It was quite small, with red details and a white frame. Compared with my current bike, it looked much simpler, and it had training wheels to help me keep my balance.

Gợi ý: Give a complete topic sentence and connect your explanation with linking words such as “because” and “although.” Use the present tense for current habits: “People mostly use cars and public transportation,” not “used.” The correct structure is “instead of using bikes,” and “I hope cycling becomes more popular” is more natural than “I would like to use it more and became the popular.” Add one specific reason, such as limited bike lanes or heavy traffic, to make the answer more developed.

Ví dụ: Not really, especially compared with European countries. In Turkey, most people use cars or public transportation because many cities do not have enough safe cycling lanes. However, cycling is becoming more popular among young people, and I hope more residents will use bikes in the future.

× It was really small and comparing to the bike that I have now...

✓ It was really small, and compared with the bike that I have now...

The phrase compared with introduces a comparison. Comparing is the present participle and does not fit this passive comparison structure. Use the past participle compared after the linking verb was.

× It has it had some red details and overall it was white colored and it has some jealous sets.

✓ It had some red details, and overall, it was white and had some yellow details.

The answer describes a bicycle from the past, so the past tense had should be used consistently instead of the present-tense verb has. The repeated phrase it has it had should also be removed. Yellow details is used here because jealous does not describe a color.

× Not really comparing to European countries.

✓ Not really. Compared with European countries, bikes are not very popular in Turkey.

The original sentence is a fragment because it does not contain a complete main clause with a subject and a finite verb. The corrected version includes the subject bikes and the verb are.

× Not really comparing to European countries.

✓ Not really. Compared with European countries, bikes are not very popular in Turkey.

Compared with is the correct participial phrase for making a comparison. Comparing incorrectly suggests that the subject is actively making the comparison.

× In Turkey it's not that popular.

✓ In Turkey, bikes are not that popular.

The subject bikes is plural, so the plural noun and plural verb are should be used. The original singular form it and is does not agree with the plural meaning.

× We mostly used car and other public transportation instead using bikes.

✓ We mostly use cars and other forms of public transportation instead of using bikes.

The question asks about the current popularity of bikes, so the present tense use is more appropriate than the past tense used. Also, cars must be plural because the sentence refers to cars in general.

× We mostly used car and other public transportation instead using bikes.

✓ We mostly use cars and other forms of public transportation instead of using bikes.

The expression is instead of, not instead followed directly by a gerund. The preposition of is required before using.

× But I would like to use it more and became the popular.

✓ But I would like to use bikes more and see them become more popular.

After would like to, the verb use must be in the base form, which is already correct here. The later verb became should not be used in the past tense. The base form become is needed after see, and more popular is the natural comparative form.

× But I would like to use it more and became the popular.

✓ But I would like to use bikes more and see them become more popular.

The phrase the popular is not a correct comparative expression. When comparing popularity over time or with another situation, use more popular. Do not use the before the adjective in this structure.