Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly in the past tense: use “didn’t have” rather than “don’t have.” Avoid restarting sentences and unclear phrases such as “I mainly I'm not” and “AI had a door baby doll.” The doll is relevant only if you clearly use it to explain your preference for toys. Give one clear reason and one specific detail, using a linking word such as “instead.”

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t interested in cycling. Instead, I preferred playing with dolls. My mother gave me a beautiful doll for my birthday, and I played with it quite often.

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly and maintain it throughout the answer. The response is difficult to understand because it contains an unfinished sentence, repeated words, and an unclear contrast between bikes being popular and people not wanting to buy them. Also, check the meaning of the examples: BMW and Bajaj are generally motorcycle brands, so specify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes. Add a clear reason and a relevant example, using “because” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use them because they are cheaper and more convenient than cars in heavy traffic. For example, brands such as Honda, Bajaj, and Yamaha are commonly seen on the roads.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a completed period in the past, so the past-tense auxiliary did not is required. Use didn't have instead of don't have.

× I mainly I'm not, I was not interested in a certain kind of toys.

✓ I mainly was not interested in certain kinds of toys.

The answer describes the student's past, so was not must be used instead of the present-tense form I'm not. The noun kinds is plural because it is followed by the plural noun toys. Also, certain kinds of toys is the natural grammatical expression.

× Uh, I have AI had a door baby doll.

✓ I had a baby doll.

The sentence refers to a possession in the past, so had is the appropriate verb form. The sequence I have AI had is not grammatical. The words AI and door appear to be speech-recognition errors and are omitted in the correction.

× Yes, I think many kinds of bikes are popular in our country such as Hirwanda, BMW, Baja etc but people don't want to buy bikes with the advancement of technology, people want to every people have their own.

✓ Yes, I think many kinds of bikes are popular in our country, such as Hirwanda, BMW, and Baja. However, with the advancement of technology, people do not want to buy bikes; they want everyone to have their own bike.

The original answer contains several clauses joined together without appropriate punctuation or conjunctions, creating a run-on sentence. Separate the ideas into two sentences and use a semicolon before the second independent clause. After want, use the structure want + person + to + base verb: want everyone to have. The phrase their own must be followed by a noun, so their own bike is complete.