Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문법과 어휘 오류가 많아 의미를 정확히 전달하기 어렵습니다. 과거의 경험을 말할 때는 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용해야 하므로 ‘ride’는 ‘rode’ 또는 ‘had ridden’으로 고쳐야 합니다. 또한 ‘five euros’는 나이를 나타내는 표현이 아니므로 ‘five years old’라고 해야 하며, ‘take a bike’ 대신 ‘ride a bike’를 사용해야 합니다. 먼저 직접적인 대답을 한 뒤, 자전거를 언제부터 탔는지와 언제 배웠는지를 논리적으로 연결하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I started riding it when I was five years old, and I learned how to ride it properly by the time I was seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Gợi ý: ‘Not at all’이라고 단정한 뒤 ‘대부분의 한국인’이라는 주장을 뒷받침할 구체적인 이유가 필요합니다. ‘Most Korean people don’t ride a bike mostly’는 어순과 문법이 부자연스러우므로 ‘Most Koreans do not use bicycles as their main form of transportation’처럼 표현하세요. 또한 ‘a balls or trying’은 의미가 불분명하므로 ‘buses or trains’로 수정해야 합니다. 주제문, 이유, 구체적인 예시의 순서로 답하고, ‘because’나 ‘instead’ 같은 연결어를 사용하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in South Korea. Most people use buses, subways, or cars instead because these forms of transportation are more convenient for commuting. However, cycling is becoming more popular as a leisure activity, especially along rivers and in parks.

× Yes, I had I always ride a bike since I was five euros and I learned how to take a bike when I was seven years old.

✓ Yes, I had one. I always rode a bike from the age of five, and I learned how to ride a bike when I was seven years old.

Because the question asks about your childhood, use the past tense. Rode is the past form of ride. Also, from the age of five is more natural than since I was five when describing a completed period in the past.

× Yes, I had I always ride a bike since I was five euros and I learned how to take a bike when I was seven years old.

✓ Yes, I had one. I always rode a bike from the age of five, and I learned how to ride a bike when I was seven years old.

The original sentence combines several clauses incorrectly. Had I is not correct in this context; use I had one. Separate the short answer from the explanation, and connect the two complete clauses with and.

× Not at all. Most Korean people don't ride a bike mostly Koreans take a balls or trying so it's not popular.

✓ Not at all. Most Korean people do not ride bikes. Most Koreans take a bus or train, so bikes are not popular.

Use the plural form bikes when speaking about bicycles in general. After a, use a singular countable noun, such as a bus. Do not use balls after a in this sentence.

× Not at all. Most Korean people don't ride a bike mostly Koreans take a balls or trying so it's not popular.

✓ Not at all. Most Korean people do not ride bikes. Most Koreans take a bus or train, so bikes are not popular.

The original contains several clauses joined without proper punctuation or conjunctions. Divide the ideas into separate sentences and use so to show the result clearly.