Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question using a complete and natural sentence. You could add one brief supporting detail, such as how often you used the bike or what you used it for. Avoid the unnatural phrase “Yes, I had” when answering about possession; use “Yes, I did” or “Yes, I had one.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence first, then support your opinion with two clear reasons. Improve grammar and natural word choice: say “bicycles are affordable for people from different income groups,” not “the bicycle is for affordable” or “under the poverty or over the poverty.” Also use “Bicycling is good exercise,” “it helps people maintain their fitness,” and avoid repetition such as “each and every person.” Keep the answer to no more than five sentences and connect ideas with words such as “Moreover” or “For example.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They are affordable for people from different income groups, and they are also an environmentally friendly way to travel. Moreover, cycling is good exercise and helps people stay fit. For example, many people ride bikes to work or use them for short trips.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses the past simple auxiliary did: Did you have a bike...? In a short affirmative answer, use did rather than had because did already carries the past tense. You can also give a complete answer: Yes, I had a bike.

× Yes, of course, because the bicycle is for affordable for each and every person who are living in the under the poverty or over the poverty. And this is very good exercise for every person to burn their excess fat and it help to maintain their.

✓ Yes, of course, because bicycles are affordable for everyone, including people living below or above the poverty line. They are also very good exercise for everyone because they help people burn excess fat and maintain their health.

When speaking about bicycles in general, use the plural noun bicycles rather than the singular bicycle. Also, the sentence needs plural references such as they and people to match the general meaning. Practice using plural nouns when you are describing a whole group or category.

× Yes, of course, because the bicycle is for affordable for each and every person who are living in the under the poverty or over the poverty. And this is very good exercise for every person to burn their excess fat and it help to maintain their.

✓ Yes, of course, because bicycles are affordable for everyone, including people living below or above the poverty line. They are also very good exercise for everyone because they help people burn excess fat and maintain their health.

The verb help must agree with the plural subject they, so they help is correct. If the subject were singular, the form would be it helps. Check the subject before choosing between help and helps.

× Yes, of course, because the bicycle is for affordable for each and every person who are living in the under the poverty or over the poverty. And this is very good exercise for every person to burn their excess fat and it help to maintain their.

✓ Yes, of course, because bicycles are affordable for everyone, including people living below or above the poverty line. They are also very good exercise for everyone because they help people burn excess fat and maintain their health.

The expressions in the under the poverty and over the poverty are incorrect. Use below the poverty line and above the poverty line. Also, affordable is followed directly by for, as in affordable for everyone; do not add for before affordable.

× Yes, of course, because the bicycle is for affordable for each and every person who are living in the under the poverty or over the poverty. And this is very good exercise for every person to burn their excess fat and it help to maintain their.

✓ Yes, of course, because bicycles are affordable for everyone, including people living below or above the poverty line. They are also very good exercise for everyone because they help people burn excess fat and maintain their health.

The phrase maintain their is incomplete because the pronoun their needs a noun after it. The natural expression is maintain their health. In addition, they is used to refer clearly to bicycles in the plural.

× Yes, of course, because the bicycle is for affordable for each and every person who are living in the under the poverty or over the poverty. And this is very good exercise for every person to burn their excess fat and it help to maintain their.

✓ Yes, of course, because bicycles are affordable for everyone, including people living below or above the poverty line. They are also very good exercise for everyone because they help people burn excess fat and maintain their health.

The phrase the under the poverty is not grammatical. The correct fixed expression is below the poverty line or above the poverty line. Use the article only before line in these expressions.

× Yes, of course, because the bicycle is for affordable for each and every person who are living in the under the poverty or over the poverty. And this is very good exercise for every person to burn their excess fat and it help to maintain their.

✓ Yes, of course, because bicycles are affordable for everyone, including people living below or above the poverty line. They are also very good exercise for everyone because they help people burn excess fat and maintain their health.

The original sentence uses articles incorrectly in the phrase the under the poverty. The correct noun phrase is the poverty line. Also, when discussing bicycles generally, the plural form bicycles is more natural than the singular bicycle with the definite article.

× Yes, of course, because the bicycle is for affordable for each and every person who are living in the under the poverty or over the poverty. And this is very good exercise for every person to burn their excess fat and it help to maintain their.

✓ Yes, of course, because bicycles are affordable for everyone, including people living below or above the poverty line. They are also very good exercise for everyone because they help people burn excess fat and maintain their health.

The original answer contains awkward and incomplete structures, especially is for affordable, who are living in the under the poverty, and maintain their. The ideas should be connected in complete sentences with clear subjects and verbs. Organize the answer as a reason followed by a second supporting reason.