Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and now I have another one bike that's bigger than the last one and obviously it's bigger than my first bike because my first was when I was six, I think and now I'm

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I'm not pretty sure about that but I think yes because so many children are using bikes now so I think it's might be popular in this time.

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Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Rispondi in modo più diretto e completa l’idea entro 2–4 frasi. Evita la ripetizione di “bike” e non dire “another one bike”: usa “another bike” oppure “a different bike”. Inoltre, “my first was when I was six” è incompleto; specifica che avevi la prima bicicletta quando avevi sei anni. Usa un collegamento semplice, come “Now” o “Compared with it”, per organizzare meglio il confronto.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got my first one when I was six, and it was quite small. Now I have a bigger bike, which is more comfortable and faster.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Inizia con una risposta chiara, ad esempio “Yes, I think they are quite popular”. Evita “I’m not pretty sure” seguito da un’opinione molto sicura, perché rende la risposta poco coerente. Correggi “it’s might be” in “they might be” o, meglio, usa “they are”, dato che “bikes” è plurale; inoltre, “in this time” dovrebbe essere “nowadays” o “these days”. Aggiungi un esempio specifico, come i bambini che vanno in bicicletta nei parchi o le piste ciclabili nelle città.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many of them ride bikes in parks or around their neighbourhoods after school. They are also becoming more common among adults because cycling is cheap and environmentally friendly.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× now I have another one bike

✓ now I have another bike

Another is used directly before a singular countable noun, so one should not be placed between another and bike. You can also say I have another one, but not another one bike.

Sentence structure errors

× because my first was when I was six

✓ because I got my first bike when I was six

The original sentence has an incorrect structure because a bike cannot be when someone was six. Use the verb got to explain when you received the bike, and include the noun bike for clarity.

Modal verb usage

× I think it's might be popular in this time

✓ I think it might be popular at this time

Might is a modal verb and must be followed directly by the base form of the verb, so use might be, not it's might be. In addition, at this time is the correct prepositional expression in this context. You can also say I think it might be popular now.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× in this time

✓ at this time

The standard expression for referring to the present period or a particular point in time is at this time. However, now is more natural in casual speech.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Pretty— Attractive; Quite; Beautify
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