Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, then add one or two clear details. Correct the grammar in “when I were twelve years” to “when I was twelve,” and avoid the confusing phrase “on small bicycles.” Use the past simple consistently and connect the details naturally.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle when I was twelve years old. I used it to ride around my neighborhood and visit my friends.

Gợi ý: Begin with a complete topic sentence, such as “Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country.” Use “economical” or “cheap” instead of “economic,” and say “for short journeys” rather than “and small journeys.” Give a specific supporting detail or example, and avoid repeating “yes” at the end.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are economical and easy to use. Many people ride them for short journeys, such as commuting to work or going to nearby shops. They are also a convenient way to avoid traffic.

× It was blue on small bicycles it was when I were twelve years.

✓ It was a small blue bicycle, and I had it when I was twelve years old.

The original sentence combines several ideas without a clear sentence structure. Use a complete clause for the bicycle and a separate clause to say when you had it.

× when I were twelve years

✓ when I was twelve years old

The question asks about the past, so use the past form was. The expression twelve years old is also the standard way to describe a person's age.

× Yes, I do a very popular in my country

✓ Yes, I do. Bikes are very popular in my country.

The clause a very popular is missing the verb are. A plural subject such as bikes requires the verb are.

× because it's economic and easy to use

✓ because they are economical and easy to use

The pronoun it refers to a singular noun, but bikes is plural, so use they are. The adjective economical is more appropriate when describing something that saves money or resources.

× easy to use and small journeys

✓ easy to use for short journeys

Use the preposition for to show the purpose or situation in which bikes are useful. The natural expression is short journeys, not small journeys.