Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I had one, uh, when I was child, my dad was trying to, uh, launch me that how to, umm, riding a bike. So I had, but I couldn't learn still.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Directly, I can't say uh they are popular because it depends on uh, children's hobbies. I think because umm, if their children interested in riding bike, parents can buy for their children's. But if they don't like umm.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor; ancak “when I was child” yerine “when I was a child”, “launch me” yerine “teach me” ve “how to riding” yerine “how to ride” kullanılmalıdır. “I had one” ile “I couldn’t learn” arasında daha doğal bir bağlantı kurun. Ayrıca “uh” ve “umm” gibi duraksamaları azaltın. Cevabı neden bisiklet kullanmayı öğrenemediğinizi açıklayarak ve mümkünse kısa bir sonuç cümlesi ekleyerek geliştirebilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad tried to teach me how to ride it, but I found it quite difficult and never learned properly. As a result, I stopped trying after a few lessons.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda bir fikir sunmaya çalışıyorsunuz; ancak “Directly, I can't say” doğal değildir. Bunun yerine “I would say they are fairly popular” veya “It depends” kullanabilirsiniz. “If their children interested” yerine “if their children are interested”, “riding bike” yerine “riding bikes” ve “buy for their children's” yerine “buy them bikes” denmelidir. Cevabı tamamlamadan bırakmayın; bisikletlerin kimler arasında popüler olduğunu ve bunun nedenini belirterek net bir sonuç verin. “However” veya “On the other hand” gibi bağlaçlarla karşılaştırmayı daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: I would say bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. However, it depends on where people live, because cycling is more common in smaller towns and areas with safe bike lanes. If children are interested in cycling, their parents are usually willing to buy them bikes.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a when referring to one child generally. Use a before child in this expression: when I was a child.

26: Sentence structure errors

× my dad was trying to launch me that how to riding a bike

✓ my dad was trying to teach me how to ride a bike

The structure launch me that how to is not grammatical for expressing instruction. Use teach someone how to do something. The sentence should be structured as teach me how to ride a bike.

8: Verb + -ing form

× how to riding a bike

✓ how to ride a bike

After to in an infinitive, use the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Therefore, say to ride, not to riding.

26: Sentence structure errors

× So I had, but I couldn't learn still.

✓ So I had one, but I still couldn't learn.

The phrase So I had is incomplete because the object one is needed to refer back to the bike. The corrected sentence also places the adverb still before the modal verb could for a more natural sentence structure.

22: Article errors

× if their children interested in riding bike

✓ if their children are interested in riding a bike

The singular countable noun bike needs the indefinite article a. Therefore, use riding a bike. The phrase also requires the verb are, which is included in the separate subject-verb agreement correction.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× if their children interested in riding bike

✓ if their children are interested in riding a bike

The adjective interested needs the verb be before it. Because children is plural, use are: their children are interested.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× parents can buy for their children's

✓ parents can buy one for their children

Their children refers to the people receiving the bike, so children should be the object of the preposition for. Children's is a possessive form and cannot be used here. Add one as the object of buy: buy one for their children.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Interested— Attentive; Concerned; Partisan
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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