Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I used to have one. It was pink, so girly. I like to have a bike ride with my dad to the final park that's near us.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I would say that banks are quite popular in Ukraine. We have uh, many cycling lines, uh, for the riders, so they would be safe and don't have to ride on uh, the busy street with cars.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and develop your response with a clear reason or specific memory. Use the natural expression “go for a bike ride” instead of “have a bike ride.” Also, “final park” is unclear; say “the park near our home” if that is what you mean. Use the past tense consistently because you are describing your childhood, and avoid unnecessary repetition of “bike.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child, which I thought was very girly at the time. I often went for bike rides with my father in the park near our home. I really enjoyed those rides because they gave us a chance to spend time together.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear answer, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular.” Use “bikes,” not “banks,” and say “bike lanes” or “cycle lanes” rather than “cycling lines.” Improve grammatical accuracy by using “so cyclists can stay safe and do not have to ride on busy streets.” Add a specific supporting detail, such as where people cycle or why cycling is becoming more common. Try to reduce fillers such as “uh” to make your response more fluent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would say that bikes are quite popular in Ukraine, especially in larger cities. Many areas have dedicated bike lanes, so cyclists can stay safe without having to ride on busy streets. Cycling is also becoming more popular because it is an affordable and environmentally friendly way to travel.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× I like to have a bike ride with my dad to the final park that's near us.

✓ I liked to have a bike ride with my dad to the final park that's near us.

The question asks about your childhood, so the past tense is needed. Change like to liked to describe a past preference or habit.

4: Modal verb usage

× We have uh, many cycling lines, uh, for the riders, so they would be safe and don't have to ride on uh, the busy street with cars.

✓ We have many cycling lanes for riders, so they can be safe and don't have to ride on busy streets with cars.

The modal verb would does not match the present-time context introduced by We have. Use can to express the present possibility or benefit. Also, use the same present structure in the coordinated phrase: can be safe and don't have to ride.

1: Singular and plural issue

× We have uh, many cycling lines, uh, for the riders, so they would be safe and don't have to ride on uh, the busy street with cars.

✓ We have many cycling lanes for riders, so they can be safe and don't have to ride on busy streets with cars.

The answer refers to streets in general, not one specific street. Therefore, use the plural form streets. The phrase busy streets is more suitable for a general statement.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× We have uh, many cycling lines, uh, for the riders, so they would be safe and don't have to ride on uh, the busy street with cars.

✓ We have many cycling lanes for riders, so they can be safe and don't have to ride on busy streets with cars.

The definite article the is used for a specific, previously identified noun. No particular street has been mentioned, so omit the article and use the general plural phrase busy streets.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Final— Last; Irrevocable; Decider
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Safe— Secure; Unharmed; Cautious; Harmless
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