Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned how to ride it at at the age of 6.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think that bikes are very popular in my country because they are really convenient and eco friendly. Almost all of my friends know how to ride a bike and own one.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: Ответ дан прямо и достаточно кратко, а возраст добавляет конкретную деталь. Однако фраза “at at the age of 6” содержит повтор предлога; правильно: “at the age of 6” или “when I was six”. Чтобы ответ звучал естественнее, можно объединить идеи с помощью “and”.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I learned to ride it at the age of six. I remember feeling really proud when I was finally able to ride without my parents’ help.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: Ответ хорошо организован: сначала высказано мнение, затем приведены причины и конкретный пример. Следует писать “eco-friendly” через дефис. Слово “really” можно заменить более точным “highly” или убрать, чтобы избежать простого повторения; также утверждение “almost all of my friends” может звучать более естественно как “many of my friends”. Для большей содержательности можно добавить результат, например уменьшение пробок или расходов на транспорт.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient, affordable, and eco-friendly. Many of my friends own one and use it to travel short distances, especially when they want to avoid traffic and save money on public transport.
Ngữ pháp
× I learned how to ride it at at the age of 6.
✓ I learned how to ride it at the age of 6.
The preposition 'at' is repeated. Use 'at the age of + number' to state the age when an event happened. Avoid repeating the same preposition.
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