Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have is when I were sick girl.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, because it is very good for environment.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý định trả lời “có”, nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và chưa diễn đạt rõ ý. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu: “Yes, I did.” hoặc “Yes, I had a bike when I was a little girl.” Lưu ý dùng “was” với “I”, không dùng “were”; đồng thời tránh cụm từ không rõ nghĩa “I have is when I were sick girl”. Nên thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn ai đã mua xe hoặc bạn thường đạp xe ở đâu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a little girl. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời khá trực tiếp và có lý do phù hợp, nhưng cần sửa “it” thành “they” hoặc “bikes” vì danh từ chính là số nhiều. Cần thêm mạo từ trong “the environment”: “They are good for the environment.” Ngoài ra, câu trả lời chỉ có một ý ngắn; hãy bổ sung một ví dụ hoặc kết quả cụ thể, chẳng hạn xe đạp giúp giảm ô nhiễm và được học sinh sử dụng. Có thể dùng từ nối như “also” hoặc “for example” để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are good for the environment. They do not produce air pollution, and many students ride them to school because they are also inexpensive.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have is when I were sick girl.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a girl.

The question asks about a past experience, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of have. The verb were is incorrect with the singular subject I; use was. Use had one to express possession of a bike in the past.

22: Article errors

× Yes, I have is when I were sick girl.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was a girl.

A singular countable noun such as girl needs an article. Use a before girl: a girl. The phrase when I was a girl is the correct grammatical expression.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, because it is very good for environment.

✓ Yes, because they are very good for the environment.

The noun bikes is plural, so it should be replaced by the plural pronoun they, not the singular pronoun it.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, because it is very good for environment.

✓ Yes, because they are very good for the environment.

The plural subject they must be followed by the plural verb are. Do not use is with a plural subject.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× Yes, because it is very good for environment.

✓ Yes, because they are very good for the environment.

Environment is used here as a specific general environment, so it normally takes the definite article the: the environment.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Sick— Ill; Nauseous; Disappointed; Fed up with; Macabre
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