Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you hear by Colonel Yo are a child
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think bags are popular in my country because to every student that's very convenient and we can sell our times to Mm have more time to study
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有清楚表达“小时候是否有自行车”,而且句子中的词语和语序难以理解。应先直接回答“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn’t.”,然后补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、使用场景或学习骑车的经历。注意准确使用“have a bike”和“when I was a child”等表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 你基本表达了自行车很受欢迎以及它方便、省时间的观点,但“bags”应改为“bikes”,“sell our times”应改为“save time”,并且“because to every student”语法不正确。建议使用清晰的结构:先回答观点,再说明原因,最后给出具体人群或场景。避免使用“Mm”等犹豫词,并注意最多用三到四句完成回答。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. They are convenient and affordable, and they help people save time when travelling short distances. Many students ride bikes to school because they can avoid traffic jams.
× Did you hear by Colonel Yo are a child
✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?
问题中的“are”是现在时,而题目询问的是童年时期的经历,因此应使用过去时“were”。另外,原句中的“hear by Colonel Yo”无法构成正确的英语表达;根据题目语境,应使用“have a bike”来表达“有一辆自行车”。
× I think bags are popular in my country because to every student that's very convenient and we can sell our times to Mm have more time to study
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because they are very convenient for every student, and we can save time and have more time to study.
“bikes”是复数名词,所以后面的代词应使用复数“they”,不能使用单数“that”。代词必须与所指的名词在人称和数上保持一致。建议先确定代词所指的名词,再选择“it”或“they”。
× I think bags are popular in my country because to every student that's very convenient and we can sell our times to Mm have more time to study
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because they are very convenient for every student, and we can save time and have more time to study.
“convenient”后面表示“对某人方便”时,应使用介词“for”,即“convenient for every student”,不能使用“to”。建议记住固定搭配“be convenient for somebody”。
× I think bags are popular in my country because to every student that's very convenient and we can sell our times to Mm have more time to study
✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because they are very convenient for every student, and we can save time and have more time to study.
“time”表示抽象的“时间”时通常是不可数名词,不能写成“times”。因此应使用“save time”。只有表示“次数”或“时代”时,才使用复数形式“times”。