Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Well, I'll probably say no because it's not my cup of tea and, uh, I can't ride a bike at all.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Of course, uh, you know, for example, there are shirt bikes on the street in China nowadays and when people uh, feel tired and they tend to go for a ride a bike rather than just walk.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,也给出了原因,但“我不能骑自行车”与“自行车不是我的兴趣”有些重复。“I'll probably say no”不够自然,可以直接说“No, I didn't.”另外,最好补充一个具体背景,例如小时候没有机会学骑车,或更喜欢其他活动。避免使用过多填充词,如“well”和“uh”。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't. I was never really interested in cycling, and I didn't have anyone to teach me how to ride a bike. Instead, I preferred playing badminton with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答有明确观点和例子,但“shirt bikes”应改为“shared bikes”,“go for a ride a bike”应改为“go for a bike ride”或“ride a bike”。“当人们感到疲惫时,他们会骑车而不是走路”逻辑不太自然;可以说明共享单车方便、价格低,适合短途出行。建议使用“because”和“for example”连接原因与具体细节,并减少“uh”和“you know”等填充词。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially shared bikes in large cities. They are convenient and inexpensive, so people often use them for short journeys, such as going to a nearby subway station or convenience store. For example, it is common to see rows of shared bikes on busy streets.
× Well, I'll probably say no because it's not my cup of tea and, uh, I can't ride a bike at all.
✓ Well, I'd probably say no because it wasn't my cup of tea and, uh, I couldn't ride a bike at all.
问题是在回答关于童年经历的问题时,使用了现在或将来形式“it's”“can't”和“I'll”。为了与问题中的过去时间保持一致,应使用过去形式“wasn't”和“couldn't”。“I'd probably say”也比“I'll probably say”更适合表达对过去情况的推测或回忆。建议:回答过去经历时,注意使用过去时,并将“can”改为“could”,将“is”改为“was”。
× Of course, uh, you know, for example, there are shirt bikes on the street in China nowadays and when people, uh, feel tired and they tend to go for a ride a bike rather than just walk.
✓ Of course, uh, you know, for example, there are shirt bikes on the street in China nowadays, and when people, uh, feel tired, they tend to go for a bike ride rather than just walk.
原句中“when people feel tired and they tend to...”的结构不完整,因为“when”引导的时间从句后面应接主句;这里的“and”多余,应删除。另外,“go for a ride a bike”把两个结构混在一起,正确表达是“go for a bike ride”。建议:使用“when + 从句,主句”的结构,并记住固定搭配“go for a bike ride”。