Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when a child I had back that belongs to my mom, she taught me how to ride a bike yet.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No I didn't, but it did alive it live often I often ride a electrical electrical bike to work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答方向基本正确,但语法和表达不清晰。应直接说明“小时候有一辆自行车”,并使用过去时:用“when I was a child”代替“when a child”,用“belonged to my mom”表达“属于我妈妈”,用“taught me how to ride”表达“教我骑车”。此外,“yet”在这里使用错误,可以删除。建议按照“直接回答+具体细节”的结构组织,控制在2—3句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bike that belonged to my mother, and she taught me how to ride it when I was about six. I really enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答没有清楚回应现在时问题,而且开头“No, I didn't”既是过去时,也与后面骑电动车上班的内容矛盾。如果你认为自行车受欢迎,应使用“Yes, I do”或“Yes, they are”;如果不受欢迎,应说明原因。注意使用正确搭配:“an electric bike”而不是“a electrical electrical bike”,“I often ride”即可,不要重复。建议加入一个具体原因,例如通勤方便、环保或城市有自行车道。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities, because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. I often ride an electric bike to work because it helps me avoid traffic jams.
× when a child
✓ when I was a child
“when a child”缺少主语和谓语,不能构成完整的从句。应使用“when I was a child”,其中“I”是主语,“was”是过去式谓语。
× that belongs to my mom
✓ that belonged to my mom
问题询问的是童年时期的经历,因此应使用过去时。“belongs”是一般现在时,改为过去式“belonged”,表示那辆自行车当时属于妈妈。
× I had back
✓ I had a bike
“bike”是可数名词单数,前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。根据上下文,“back”应为“bike”,完整表达是“I had a bike”。
× No I didn't
✓ No, I don't
问题使用一般现在时“Do you think...”,回答也应使用一般现在时,因此不能用过去时“didn't”,应改为“don't”。
× but it did alive it live often I often ride a electrical electrical bike to work
✓ but I often ride an electric bike to work
原句包含重复、无意义的词语和错误的句子结构,如“did alive it live often”。应保留清晰的主语“I”、频率副词“often”和谓语“ride”,组成完整句子。
× a electrical electrical bike
✓ an electric bike
“electric”以元音音素开头,所以前面应使用“an”,而不是“a”。此外,“electrical”被重复使用,应删除重复词。
× a electrical electrical bike
✓ an electric bike
修饰自行车时,通常使用形容词“electric”,而不是“electrical”。“electric bike”表示“电动自行车”;同时不能重复使用同一个形容词。