Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then organize the story with clear linking words such as “At first” and “When I turned seven.” Avoid repetition in “Yes, I did have” and use natural phrases such as “a pink bike,” “when I was five,” and “training wheels” instead of “practice wheels.” Also, break the long final sentence into two shorter sentences to improve fluency and accuracy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave me my first one when I was about five, and it was a pink bike with training wheels. When I turned seven, we took the wheels off, and he added a small basket to the front. I was very proud of it and used to ride it around my neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason and example. Replace the informal and slightly unnatural phrase “Oh, believe me” with a more natural expression such as “Yes, definitely.” Avoid the sentence fragment “As a matter of fact, not just for children” by connecting it to the previous sentence. Use “to and from work or school” and “heavy traffic” instead of “to and fro from work” and “rough traffic.”

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in India, not only among children but also among adults. Many people ride them to and from work or school because traffic in major cities can be extremely heavy. They are also an affordable and convenient way to travel short distances.

× It was a pink colour bike.

✓ It was a pink bike.

Pink is already an adjective, so colour is unnecessary in this phrase. Use pink bike or pink-coloured bike. Avoid combining an adjective with the noun colour before another noun unless the structure is formed correctly.

× And once I was about 7 years, those wheels were taken off and I got a small basket.

✓ And once I was about 7 years old, those wheels were taken off and I got a small basket.

When stating a person's age, use the expression years old, not years alone. For example, say I was seven years old or when I was about seven years old.

× As a matter of fact, not just for children.

✓ As a matter of fact, bikes are not just for children.

The original sentence is a fragment because it does not contain a main verb. Add the subject bikes and the verb are to make it a complete sentence.