Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng và có thêm chi tiết cụ thể về màu sắc cũng như người mua xe. Tuy nhiên, cần dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu: “bought”, “loved” và “made”. Sửa “that I very love” thành “which I loved very much” hoặc “that I really loved”; sửa “a favorite present that I have ever gotten” thành “one of my favorite presents that I have ever received”. Ngoài ra, nên tránh lặp từ “bike” và kết nối các ý tự nhiên hơn bằng “It was also...”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my parents bought me a pink bike, which I loved very much. It was one of my favorite presents because I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời đúng hướng và đưa ra quan sát thực tế, nhưng có nhiều lỗi từ vựng, ngữ pháp và diễn đạt. “By” cần sửa thành “bikes”, còn “famous” nên dùng “popular”. Chỉ sử dụng một cụm thời gian: “at the weekend” hoặc tự nhiên hơn là “on weekends”. Với xe đạp, dùng động từ “ride” thay vì “drive”, và “look happy” thay vì “look happily” vì “happy” bổ nghĩa cho người. Câu trả lời cũng nên có một lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để phát triển ý, chẳng hạn xe đạp phổ biến vì thân thiện với môi trường hoặc giúp mọi người tập thể dục.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. On weekends, many people ride bicycles around parks or along the streets for exercise and relaxation. They are also becoming more popular because they are environmentally friendly and inexpensive.

× Yes, actually when I was a child, my mom and my dad bought me a pink bike that I very love.

✓ Yes, actually, when I was a child, my mom and dad bought me a pink bike that I love very much.

The adverbial phrase very much should be placed after the verb or at the end of the clause. Very cannot normally be used directly before the verb love in this sentence. Use love very much to express strong affection.

× This bike is a favorite present that I have ever gotten and this makes me feel happy.

✓ This bike is my favorite present that I have ever gotten, and this makes me feel happy.

When describing one item as the best or most preferred item in a group, use a superlative expression such as my favorite. A favorite present does not clearly express that this is the best present the speaker has received.

× Well, I think that by is very famous.

✓ Well, I think that bikes are very popular.

The question asks about bikes in general, so the plural noun bikes is appropriate. The plural subject bikes must be followed by the plural verb are. Also, popular is the natural word for something that many people like or use.

× In the weekend, at the weekend, I see that many people drive, ride a bike around the city and they look happily.

✓ At the weekend, I see many people riding bikes around the city, and they look happy.

Use at the weekend, not in the weekend, to refer to the weekend period. In American English, on the weekend is also common.

× In the weekend, at the weekend, I see that many people drive, ride a bike around the city and they look happily.

✓ At the weekend, I see many people riding bikes around the city, and they look happy.

After see when describing an action that is happening or in progress, use the object followed by the present participle: see people riding. This structure is more natural than see that people ride in this context.

× In the weekend, at the weekend, I see that many people drive, ride a bike around the city and they look happily.

✓ At the weekend, I see many people riding bikes around the city, and they look happy.

Look is a linking verb, so it should be followed by an adjective describing the people. Use happy, not the adverb happily. Happy describes their condition, whereas happily describes the manner of an action.