Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 時制と内容に矛盾があります。「when you were a child」は過去の経験を尋ねているため、「I am a child now」ではなく「I was a child」と考えます。また、自転車に乗るのに通常 license は必要ないので、理由としては「my parents didn’t buy me one」や「I preferred other activities」のような自然な表現を使いましょう。まず「No, I didn’t」と直接答え、その後に過去形で具体的な理由を1文加えると、文法と構成が改善します。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t. My parents didn’t buy me a bike when I was young, so I usually walked or took the bus instead.

Gợi ý: 「I don’t think so」と答えた後の理由を、正しい比較表現で説明しましょう。「more popular down bikes」は誤りなので、「cars are more popular than bikes」と言います。また、「the I don’t know」は意味が不明確なため削除し、車が人気である具体的な理由として「they are more convenient for long-distance travel」などを加えるとよいです。自転車の普及状況について、都市部や通勤などの具体例を1つ入れると、内容と語彙の評価が上がります。

Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because cars are more convenient for long-distance travel. Most people use cars to commute, although bikes are becoming more common in large cities.

× No I didn't because I I am a child now and I don't have any license of bike.

✓ No, I didn't, because I am an adult now, and I don't have a license to ride a bike.

The preposition of is incorrect in license of bike. Use to ride a bike or for riding a bike to express the purpose of the license. The repeated pronoun I should also be removed for a grammatically correct sentence.

× No I didn't because I I am a child now and I don't have any license of bike.

✓ No, I didn't, because I am an adult now, and I don't have a license to ride a bike.

License is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a license, not any license, in this affirmative noun phrase. The phrase a bike also needs the article a because bike is a singular countable noun.

× I don't think so because the I don't know car is more popular down bikes.

✓ I don't think so, because cars are more popular than bikes.

When speaking about cars and bikes in general, use the plural forms cars and bikes. The plural subject cars also requires the plural verb are.

× I don't think so because the I don't know car is more popular down bikes.

✓ I don't think so, because cars are more popular than bikes.

Do not use the definite article the when referring to cars in general. The phrase the car refers to a specific car, whereas cars refers to cars as a general category.

× I don't think so because the I don't know car is more popular down bikes.

✓ I don't think so, because cars are more popular than bikes.

The comparative structure is more + adjective + than. Therefore, say more popular than bikes, not more popular down bikes.

× I don't think so because the I don't know car is more popular down bikes.

✓ I don't think so, because cars are more popular than bikes.

The word order in the original sentence is incorrect, especially the phrase the I don't know car. A clear sentence needs a subject, verb, and comparison in the correct order: cars are more popular than bikes.