Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp là bạn từng có một chiếc xe đạp, nhưng có nhiều lỗi dùng từ và cấu trúc. “Just definitely” không tự nhiên; “a great eye” cần sửa thành “a great bike”, còn “in my birthday party” nên là “on my birthday”. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể như ai tặng, đặc điểm của xe và cảm xúc của bạn. Hãy tránh diễn đạt dài dòng và dùng từ nối như “I remember that” hoặc “because”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a bright red bike with a basket and several gears. I remember receiving it on my birthday, and I was extremely excited because I had wanted one for a long time.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và gần như không truyền đạt được ý nghĩa rõ ràng. “Bai” có thể là lỗi nhận dạng của từ “bikes”, nhưng cần phát âm và sử dụng đúng từ này; “pupil consumed by for many” cũng không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp như “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country”, rồi đưa ra lý do cụ thể, chẳng hạn xe đạp rẻ, tiện lợi, thân thiện với môi trường hoặc phổ biến ở các thành phố nhỏ. Câu trả lời Part 1 chỉ cần khoảng 2–4 câu rõ ràng, có liên kết bằng “because” hoặc “especially”.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people living in smaller cities. They are affordable, convenient, and environmentally friendly. However, many adults prefer motorbikes because they can travel longer distances more quickly.

× Just definitely when I was a kid I had a great eye with a lot of functions and I also still remember vividly the first time when I had this item in my birthday party.

✓ Definitely, when I was a kid, I had a great bike with a lot of functions, and I still vividly remember the first time I had this item at my birthday party.

The preposition in is incorrect for a birthday party in this context. Use at when referring to an event or occasion: at my birthday party. The sentence also sounds clearer when the adverb definitely appears at the beginning and vividly appears before the verb remember.

× Just definitely when I was a kid I had a great eye with a lot of functions and I also still remember vividly the first time when I had this item in my birthday party.

✓ Definitely, when I was a kid, I had a great bike with a lot of functions, and I still vividly remember the first time I had this item at my birthday party.

Definitely is better placed at the beginning of the sentence to introduce the speaker’s certainty. Vividly is more natural before the main verb: vividly remember. Commas should also be used around the introductory when-clause.

× To be honest, I realize that many Bai are quite well known in my country simply because I experience a lot of pupil consumed by for many

✓ To be honest, I think bikes are very popular in my country because I see a lot of people using them.

The original sentence contains an incomplete and disordered structure, especially the phrase experience a lot of pupil consumed by for many. A complete sentence needs a clear subject, verb, and complement. The corrected version uses the simple structure I see a lot of people using them.

× To be honest, I realize that many Bai are quite well known in my country simply because I experience a lot of pupil consumed by for many

✓ To be honest, I think bikes are very popular in my country because I see a lot of people using them.

After the verb see, the pattern see + object + verb-ing can describe an action in progress. Therefore, see a lot of people using them is grammatically correct. The verb using refers to people riding or using bikes.