Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your response is clear and directly answers the question with a brief supporting detail (age). To improve, make the answer slightly more natural and fluent by using a fuller topic sentence and one more specific detail (e.g., who gave it to you, what kind of bike it was, or a short memory). Keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use a linking phrase to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My first bike was a small red bicycle that I got from my parents when I was about six. I remember learning to ride it in the park with my older brother helping me, which made that summer really memorable.

Gợi ý: Your answer communicates your opinion but contains hesitations and repetition, and could be more specific. To improve, state your opinion clearly, reduce filler words (umm), use a linking word to introduce reasons or examples, and give one or two specific reasons or comparisons about why bikes are not popular (e.g., traffic, public transport, weather, infrastructure). Aim for 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular as everyday transport in my country. For example, most people prefer cars or buses because the cities are busy and there aren't enough bike lanes, so cycling is mostly done by hobby groups rather than commuters.

× My first bike was probably when I was around 6 or 7.

✓ I probably got my first bike when I was around six or seven.

The original sentence uses 'was' incorrectly because 'first bike' is an object, not an event or time. Use a past-tense verb that indicates receiving or owning (got) to describe obtaining the bike. Also spell out single-digit numbers in formal speech; this makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct. Suggestions: use verbs like 'got', 'received', or 'had' with a time phrase (e.g., 'I got my first bike when I was six').

× I don't think so. I mean there's some groups of people that like to umm, ride the bike, but in everyday life I don't think bike is umm, a popular transportation.

✓ I don't think so. I mean there are some groups of people who like to ride bikes, but in everyday life I don't think bikes are a popular form of transportation.

Multiple issues: 'there's some groups' is incorrect because 'groups' is plural and needs 'there are' (subject-verb agreement). The term 'that' for people is less natural than 'who'. 'Ride the bike' should be plural 'ride bikes' when speaking about people in general. 'Bike is a popular transportation' is incorrect: 'transportation' is an uncountable noun and needs a classifier like 'a form of transportation', and 'bikes' should agree in plurality. Suggestions: use 'there are' with plural nouns, use 'who' for people, use plural nouns when generalizing ('bikes'), and use 'a popular form of transportation' for clarity.